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Regidar


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I know this story will be decimated by tomorrow's episode, but meh.

I'm not very proud of this one, but hey. Whatever.

EDIT (February 16th 2013):
I lied. I really like this fic.

EDIT (January 13th 2014):
Or maybe I reverse lied. We'll never know.

Hope it does well! I'll fave when it comes out so it has a better chance at the popular bar.

Regidar = instant 1k favorites

Even though a bit of this wasn't your own work, just you taking from the show and writing it down in story form, this was good.
Maybe it was horrible, since I was listening to The Fray while I read this...
Bravo good sir, bravo.

Nice to see an Ali-Twi fic that doesn't blow everything out of proportion...

NIce job on this. :pinkiehappy:

25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m9d6e1D3gQ1rcyuxao1_500.jpg A nice fic before tomorrow's ep. I like it! :twilightsmile:

This fic actually makes somewhat tolerate Ali-Twi.
But not by much :ajbemused:

WELL IF YOU WANTED HONESTY, THAT'S ALL YOU HAD TO SAY!

Only one thing to say... 29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lltzgnHi5F1qzib3wo1_400.jpg

Nobody knows what tomorrow will bring, but hopefully nobody goes apeshit insane and leaves the fandom. And let us all hope that the influx of Alicorn Twilight fics doesn't overwhelm the site! Now, I must prepare my house for the massacre that comes in the morning. Allow me to lighten the mood with a Ronald Reagan quote...

"I've noticed that everyone who is for abortion has already been born."
-Ronald Reagan

I hope this goes well.

Alright fine story but I gave it like 6/10.
You disgrace family.

“I’m not okay,” Twilight said, staring into the grass. “I promise.”

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Me: feels feels feels feels feels feels fee-

Twilight Sparkle face broke out into a smile.

*Sparkle's
Gah, kinda ruined it for me.
Great story nonetheless!

Oh mai, feels...

telecentically

telekinetically

Huh. Nice. I'm now going to find a nice corner, huddle down by myself...

...

And laugh. Curse my only emotional outlet!

You had me worried there for a sec at the end.....Nicely done with the theme at the very end!:pinkiesmile:

THE FEELS!!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!! :raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair: WHY DIDN"T SHE DIE?!?!?!? :raritycry::raritydespair::raritycry::fluttershbad:

Great quote by Dickinson in the synopsis, but don't forget the rest of it.

"Hope is the thing with feathers

That perches in the soul

And sings the tune without the words

And never stops at all

And sweetest in the gale is heard

And sore must be the storm

That could abash the little bird

That kept so many warm."

— Emily Dickinson

Like most of Dickinson's poems, it doesn't have a happy ending.

IT'S HAPPENING

“I’m not okay,” Twilight said, staring into the grass. “I promise.”

heh

where's nicholas cage?

2129049
Hope unbound
Joys to be found
Death is life
peace is strife
hold Hope close
like the tender rose
even in the eye of the storm
keep it safe and warm
Let it grow and bloom
The face of defeat may loom
But the gentle flower bends
Refusing the ends
to be the signal for all
and defeat then has to fall
the tide returns and the garden begins again
even against the attempts of men.
Love prevails
hatred fails
Hope stays true
Life. Begins. ANEW.

2128141
Good on you Regi.
Sometimes I wonder about your sanity then you write this and I remember who you are and I nod and whisper with tears in my eyes
"Regidar."

2129049 Hello, guy who tends to quote famous people at the beginning of a fic that doesn't even serve a legitimate purpose in any kind of existence. (takes a deep breath) Nice to see you again. Pretentious asshole...

2129243
Better to be too hot or too cold as opposed to lukewarm. I want each story I write to leave an impact on the reader. An author may leave their readers feeling happy, sad or angry. The most important thing is for them to walk away from the story feeling something.
(In my case, they usually start feeling something while reading.) :raritywink:

The fact that you seem transfixed with 120 Days of Blueblood tells me that it left an impact on you.

2128141
Looks good! I had actually planned on using that Emily Dickinson poem as a preface to one of the appendix chapters to 120 Days of Blueblood. You have a good taste in poetry.

Fuck sake, how can you write so goddamn much, this is what, your 42nd story uploaded to the site?

2129539 43rd. I'll be lucky to write my next story by the time Gabe releases Half Life 3.

2129546

No worries, you've got tons of time. Valve Time and all that. Kinda hard to not write for a decade.

You forgot the Sad tag. Just sayin'.

I liked the ending. Still, I felt there were too many flashbacks in the middle before I got to see what the story was about.

2129314 It's weird. I've read some fics of yours.
The closest that I've come to legitimately liking was Lyra and Bonbon's Odd Jobs.
That and I've been invited to co-riff Mouthing Off, along with continuing the Blueblood riff.
...
I'm wondering why you're a brony in the first place.
You would be more fitting as a pornographer, seeing as how that's all you really do.
Unsexy porn that makes me want to destroy the Earth and everyone on it.

...Wow. You can write some pretty crazy stuff, but this was beautiful!

REGIIIIIDAAAAAAAAAR!

2130858 REGIDAR

REGIDAR

WHAT HAS BECOME OF YOU...

Does anybody else in here

Feel the way I do?

2130865 LOLWAT

LOLWAT.

YOU'VE THROWN ME THROUGH A LOOP!

I really lost my perceptions of you,

you crazy little doop.


(I fail, but still it was fun! We need an alicorn twilight emoticon :D)

Feels, man. Was a bit short, though. Would've liked some more focus on the emotions.

...But then again, that's probably what everyone else is going to do. Carry on.

I'll tolerate ageless alicorns, but not invulnerable ones. If they have a body, it can be killed. They deserve that mercy.

2132380 Immortal is different from invulnerable.

2132393

"Immortal" is a vague term used both ways, but taken in context with Twilight's attempted suicide, I can assume you didn't mean "invulnerable."

2132641 Alrighty, just checking.

2132380

If they have a body, it can be killed.

"If it bleeds, we can kill it!"

“I’m not okay,” Twilight said, staring into the grass. “I promise.”

We all saw what you did there

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