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That One Bastard


I'm sorry to all of you.

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As a young adult, Sebastian was having the time of his life. He had his own small group of friends, a loving family, and a clean home in a nice neighborhood.

Key-word being "had".

After the accident, he finds himself in a different time, a different place, and, most importantly, a different body.

Hey everybrony, just jumping on the bandwagon here.
Tags and characters will be added as the story progresses.
Why yes! I DO suck at descriptions!

Edit: 6/8/2014
I got featured.
I'm crying right now oh my god help me

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 337 )

arron/lairon/aggron be my favorite pokemon, so i have high hopes for this. will read later when i get through the other 57 updates! lol!

as i go, have a pinkie! :pinkiesmile:

edit: ok, so i went ahead and read this anyways. so far, looks VERY good. instant follow! looking forward to more!!

edit #2: felt i should say that your story is very well written, and the pacing seems spot on. keep up the good work!

More Pokemon fics! Was planning on a Keldeo and the Muskadeers myself :pinkiehappy:

can he evolve into a Aggron already :heart:
im sure aj would piss herself if she saw that

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I know I'm doing well when Dunsparce likes my story.
:rainbowkiss:

What is up with the pokemon fics recently? I didn't even think Burning Souls was that good.

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I guess many people just wanted to join in on the fun and try to get featured. And I agree with you, Burning Souls was kinda "Meh."
I guess people just wanted to try and improve upon the idea.
So...
You read the story?
:rainbowkiss:

Cool, another decent pokémon crossover. Nice.

I like the way it's written even if I'd wish we had more access to his thoughts. So far so good, let's see where you take us.

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Oh don't worry, I just wanted to even out how much attention each party got in this chapter. There'll definitely be more of Sebastian's thoughts further along in the story.

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Aggron? What Aggron?
:rainbowkiss:

Glad ya'll liked this!

First chapter looking real good :pinkiehappy:, good to see that inspiration put to good use.
BTW are you going to focus on this story for now or are you planning on starting something else?


PS: Damn AJ you scary:derpytongue2:.

...I've got nothing witty to say, just... yes please.

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Hey hey hey, you made it! Yeah, the song kinda hits me deep, you know, so thanks for the compliment!
Also, I'll be focusing on this story fir a while, so expect a new chapter this or next week.

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Mission Accomplished!
*cue stereotypical music and victory dance*
:yay:
Thanks, man!

This is alright. I'm interested in seeing what Sebastian's like when he hasn't just had a near death experience.
I like how you have it so Sebestian can't actually talk, since, you know, most pokemon can't. If I may make a suggestion, for the future, try to always have the story being told from Sebestian's perspective. If you jump perspectives like you did in this chapter, then it becomes easy to slip into the habit of telling the readers how a certain character feels or what they're thinking rather than showing it.
Also, relevant: 25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m4cb1ePKLu1rnzez5o1_400.png

i find it hilarious that a wave of pokemon fics came out a week after mine did.

and it wasn't even featured.

good so far like the 3rd poke fic i fav lol wtf caused the rush of poke fics?

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Thanks for the advice, I'll be sure to implement it next chapter.

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I guess people saw how popular they became and wanted to follow the crowd.

hes cute now jest wait intill he evolves:twilightsmile:

I find myself liking this, and reccomend that you continue.

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Ah, so the Master of Change himself approves?
:rainbowkiss:

2116910 A changed form and changed story earns my approval.

I liked how this story started, you didn't focus too much on what happened to him and not only did you not give him free and easy to use powers you used someone who probably hadn't the foggiest what a pokemon even is, I really like how nothing is being handed to him on a silver platter and his reactions seem real and understandable, I just have one question; Is he going to re-learn how to speak English or is he going to basically be mute the entire story?

And now they find out that Arron eat metal when he starts nibbling on Mac's collar.

I'm only giving a thumbs up cuz thats my favorite pokemon :trixieshiftleft:

You forgot to mention how heavy an aron is, you should've had applejack say something about how heavy he is. applejack could carry him 'cause she's strong, but she certainly would have been caught off-guard by how much he weighs.

Aron are 132 pounds. lol.

Aron also eat metal, hope that helps.

oh please tell me he'll evelove:twilightsheepish: but ill read this after im done reading the well thought out goku vs superman argument (GOKU SHOULD HAVE WON DAMMIT:flutterrage:)

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Not exactly, but there are always other ways to communicate.

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Applejack is an extremely strong workhorse. But I'll clear this up later. And yes, I know metal will be nommed.
:rainbowkiss:

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So... You don't like the story?
:pinkiesad2:
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2118388 nono i didnt say anything about not liking the story:twilightoops: i was just asking about if he would evolve but i had to do something else:twilightsheepish:im going to read it thats for sure and i like the idea:twilightsmile:

well i like it so far cant wait for more and keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

Very Very good story. Hope for more soon.

You!:ajbemused:.......

Fucking awesome man!:pinkiehappy:

I find this story to be well thought out, have good complications that impede the main character instead of him being handed everything, and a good future. This story earns you a 9.5/10 on my story scale.

Also, please tell me he evolves. Sure he may be cute now, but I would love to see their reactions to him evolving into a lairon. And it would be even funnier when they see him become an aggron. Cute little guy glows, then turns into a bigger guy with a more developed build. Then, somewhat small/big guy evolves into a freaking goliath.:pinkiecrazy:

Still, this story is well done and I am now tracking it. Well done sir, well done.

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I just love how people keep asking if he'll evolve. XD

Thanks man, is there anything you would like to see improved?

Pretty much anything I'd have to say has already been said. There's not too much to improve on. There are many questions I could ask, but I'm sure you will answer them in time.

This should be interesting. Look forward to reading.

hey look. its 4th best pokemon. the first 3 being rayquaza, aggron, and groudon. :heart:

an Aggron would make a good toa of iron

I wonder what his moves will be? maybe he can tackle apple trees to help out on the farm.:ajsmug:

Some wolves are gonna get their shit stomped in when someone evolves...

Aron:
Imperial: 132.3 lbs
Metric: 60.0 kg
Aron Facts

M.C

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Was that...
Was that a Bionicle reference?

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Thanks for the link, but I'm good on facts for now.

I know next to nothing about Pokemon but this story seems promising and I still haven't outgrown HiE. Hopefully you won't drop this story and continue writing it.:raritywink:

2121811 Neither do I!! Muhahahahhaha!! :3

M.C

Dang it... this story is good.
To good... now I feel the need to throw my hat into this pokemon craze.

I know what I'm gonna do! I'm going to wait 6 months for this to die down and then I'll post a story where the human gets turned into a Slowpoke!

The amount of pokemone crossovers is definitely at an all time high but what I like is that all of the good ones are about little or odd pokemon, no OP ones like an Entei or Rayquaza. Let's see what you can do!
Relevent: cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/34865005.jpg

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