After Nightmare Night Sonic Flare finds himself in the dog house because he broke his wife's favorite tea cup. In order to redeem himself he must go to Canterlot where the cup was made and get a new one. But something happens that nopony could have foreseen.
(Sequel to: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/61252/whirl-wind-sonic-flare-in-nightmare-night )
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Then they get it, and their adventure comes to an e--
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A reference to Monty Python leads to a fave before read.
Well, that was quick...
Never before have I seen so much compressed into 4 chapters. It felt almost as if I'm in the middle of an epic rather than the beginning of a series. Not sure why I didn't hate this, as a story that moves too fast is one of my biggest pet peeves, but you've somehow made me like this fast-pace. Kinda strange, but I've felt like this in similar situations before, so *shrugs*. My only complaint is that Chrysalis died a bit too soon IMO.
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As a villain I found that Chrysalis is very weak if she does not have any love to feed off of, with that in mind I figured that the princesses had just had enough of her and so did I, so I just gave her a quick death.
That is also why I did not put her picture as one of the tags in this story.
"I hope Air doesn’t tear me a new plothole"