• Member Since 29th Aug, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 28th, 2023

ZStrike37


A pony fan who enjoys a good pony fic. I am a brony through and through. I don't know what else to say, so I'll just say... pickle-barrel-kumquat!

T
Source

Applejack is gone and she misses her. She misses the way things used to be. What does a pony do when there is nothing left for her? Fate can be a pleasant coincidence or it can be a cruel burden. As she ponders over the world around her, she takes one final moment to remember what she had... who she used to be. She is not that mare any longer. She is simply ready to go.

(A/N: This story was not planned. It was the result of me listening to some sad violin music. So I thought about the premise, chose my main character, opened up a text doc, and just started writing what came to mind.)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Not sure what to say. In full truth originality... well... subnormal, most like to avoid the suicide thought, though I have seen 3 including this one. However, they have all been well orchestrated one with a classic rope, the second with fire, the third a berry. Fine Work

2098121

Yeah, I agree with you there. It's just what I came up with listening to sad violin music. I like spur-of-the-moment writing. That kind of writing may not lead to my best work, but it's what I like to do. Thank you for the nice comment. :twilightsmile:

I was very confused at first but then caught on. Great story. Sorry, I'm tired so the comment isn't all that helpful. :ajsleepy:

I smell something wrong.

Applejack is gone and she misses her. She misses the way things used to be. What does a pony do when there is nothing left for her? Fate can be a pleasant coincidence or it can be a cruel burden. As she ponders over the world around her, she takes one final moment to remember what she had... who she used to be. She is not that mare any longer. She is simply ready to go.

Applejack is gone and she misses her.

Me: Who misses Applejack?

She misses the way things used to be?

So much questions.

[img] http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/266/6/b/applejack_statue_by_astrotheh-d5fpmo7.jpg [/img]

2099290
Hehe, I appreciate the time you used to post the comment. Shows you at least liked it enough to post which fuels me with gratitude and pushes me to do better in the future! Your comment was plenty helpful! Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

2099822
Sorry if it's a bit confusing. I tried to make it perplexing to begin with but maybe I was a bit vague with who the pony was. It's more of an idea about "I lost everything that made me me, so I'm no longer me" kind of thing if that makes any sense at all.

2166580
Don't be making me sad!! :applecry:

Login or register to comment