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Luminous Daze


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TeXXy #1 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · 4 ·

lol u can see rarity's butt in the cover photo

Who's the wise ass that disliked this story...it was perfect

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I'm guessing It might of been cause of my grammar. May need an editor to look over it :derpytongue2:

Full plot summary: Rainbow confesses to Rarity and (spoilers) they bang.

Oh gawsh. the whole time i was expecting Sweetie Belle to come barging in on them.:unsuresweetie::raritycry:

No boner, but this is a nice story, quite lovely :raritystarry::rainbowkiss:

Wow...you really had me going at the start there, I really enjoyed this story, keep up the great work

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They have breats but they are called "teats".

Like Milky way

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That was so romantic. :heart:

Raridash? Yes please.

Good luck. All good things come to those who Raridash

I like the ending, that was great, as for the rest, it was good.

This sounds like a RainbowXDiamond Tiara fic.

hmmm, too short. not to mention, kind of rushed, but despite that, was a solid romantic sex scene, but it falls on the premise discovered that they are already in a relationship
i prefer the stories that build up the setting, not that this was bad, but this is at best like an "after story" to a romance buildup story, or maybe even a scene without a more complicated story.

wasn't bad for what it was, but not enough of a build for me to enjoy it.

“Dash... you don't have to be my model anymore... I can't bare bear to see those depressed looks on your face... you are too pretty for negative expressions...” Rarity gave a sympathetic look that still contained her original worry.

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