I wake in Luna's castle after getting ready for the day, Vinyl busted though my door and told me to follow her. I did and when we got outside I see Octavia, Whooves, and Derpy geared up and the ruins of what use to be a beautiful paradise. We set off to leave and found out the cause of this.
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Okay, so I finally got through this chapter, and honestly, I love the way you've placed Derpy, Doctor Whooves, Vinyl, and the rest of the crew into this story. You should mark it as complete if it is, lol. It's a good story, and I hope you post more like it.
Oops, you already marked it as complete.
2361626 Um.. it is labeled at complete. I will, but it will be only OCs. I am starting on the sequel to my first story and I have a line of what I want done by when and all of that.
2361643 That's brilliant! I should try writing my own deadlines for stories and work accordingly. Thanks for the inspiration!!
2361665 A while ago you thanked me for advice and I am sorry I didn't reply to that explaining my thankfulness to the comment.