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Luna is a little filly who has never received a gift on Hearts and Hooves Day, so when she receives a card from a colt at school, she has no idea what to do. With a little help from her big sister Celestia, Luna just might gain the confidence she needs to take her first step in love.
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aaaaaaawwwwwwww it's so cute ^^
I like the approach you took for Luna.
And this was a very nice story.
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Once you forget to worry about why the Princesses are at school, it's adorable. G'job!
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I'm glad you liked the story. Yeah, I had a whole reason for the school thing that I could have gone into, but it just didn't fit into the story I was trying to tell. Basically I figured that they would attend a private school as fillies, and be taken out of school somewhere around highschool age to start training to become the future rulers of Equestria. The reason they attend school with other ponies is to let them experience life outside of the castle and create bonds with ponies their own age.
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it
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Thanks. Luna's one of my favorite characters and I love writing her as a cute little filly; it's so much fun.
so many cute.
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Indeed
omg yess amazing
you should make a series of the days and nights of filly luna
any ways good job
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and yeah, I've pretty much been writing nothing but filly Luna/Tia fics as I already have another finished and I still have another one on the way; they're just my two favorite ponies to write for 
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it
2111531 i can see that
you have some great stuff working for you 
keep it up
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Thanks
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IT'S BEAUTIFULL
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I'm glad you liked it
D'aaaaaw my heart exploded!
Despite that I still have a suggestion to make!
When you do character thoughts (When Luna was thinking about liking her mane) use the italics to signify that. It makes following the thoughtline so much easier when they do not have to pick it out of the narrative.
Loved the story, I'll go ahead and add it to the groups of Twilight's Library since I'm able to
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. I went ahead and fixed it as soon as I saw your comment. I'm also really glad my story exploded your heart
(or maybe I should feel sad 
), it just means that I'm doing my job correctly. Oh, and thank you for adding them to the group folders 
.
Thanks for catching the section with the italics; I have it that way in the original doc, I just forgot to change it again when I put it on FIMfiction
2302197 You should feel good about giving adorableness to the reader.
I know I feel joy when I make my readers cry from my sadfics
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(please forgive the shameless plugging of my other stories 
you don't really have to read them)
Well, if you like feels, you might also like the sequels I wrote for this story called Forever in my Heart, and I Give You my Heart
All the d'awwws!
Awww!
I almost cried because I read the sequel yesterday.
Really adorable story!
It is unspeakable or...
I can't find words to describe....
IT'S ADORKWABLE!!!!
DAWWW!!!
3745660 What sequel?
6291893 This one
THAT. WAS. A. CUTENESS. OVERLOAD!!!!!!
