I think I would enjoy seeing twi vore pinkie...just maybe not with her mouth...

never read vore before....

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Sorry, I only do oral vore.

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never written vore before

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meh it was worth a shot, still I would like a tad more detail on the act of swallowing and body motion of making twi or some other pony being moved through the body. Now the talk of vore has made me remember a fic I read a while ago about ponies being made of food, like rarity was realy a marshmallow. then again twi might find ponies have different tastes literly.

Sorry I tend to ramble

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I'll see what I can whip up. Like it says in the description, this entire thing was thrown together and edited in 72 hours on the prompt "The First Time"

I didn't get to do much editing until now.

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I look forward to the messy madness. I might not be able to write for crap but I still enjoy talking witht he writers.
though all in all I was not really looking for any errors, not unless they are just glaring at me. I am in it for the story more than anything

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As any writer should be, but fixing up the errors is akin to putting on a nice suit. It helps to look the part.

This story is so fucked up it's actually cool.

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I can see that. I look forward to your further vore works and series

My Little Fetish: Vore is Magic

Baawwww, I was hoping for Same-Size...erm, because that would totally be weird, and I would laugh at it and think you are all weirdandyeahplzdomore

I've read and seen a lot of vore in my time and I got a say that that was one of the best.

Same-size? Guys pls. Micro is the best vore :D.
Awesome story dude. One of the best mlp vore I've ever read. You could write sequel with Pinkie play time inside Twilight. ;)

Did anyone else yell; "O ST SON" when they read the short description and title?

3236681 looks like we share a guilty pleasure

Ha.

2100413 I read this out of curiosity. Vore is not usually my "thing," you see, but this was at least done well. If you make any continuation at all, I would have to suggest you have Twilight returning the favor for Pinkie, but any of the Mane 6 works.

Heck, maybe have Twilight go to speak to Celestia about this, only to find the Princess of the Sun is feeling...curious.

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Bah, fine. One more TwiPie vore chapter coming up. Role Reversal style.

4810697 The bronies have spoken! Long live bronyocracy!

This comments section is nilarious XD

Oh and the story was pretty good too :3

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Could it have been Touch, Don't Taste? It doesn't have Rarity in it, though.