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Shinedown T. Mare is a hardworking peacekeeper for New York, waiting for his sister to arrive for a family weekend of sorts his boss has set up. But when his sister Trixie's performance in a park gets a harsh and cruel review, Shinedown goes straight into big brother mode, determined to make things right...but to add to the intrigue, the critic who scorched his sister in a review is the most likely suspect in a recent murder. Is Shinedown on to something...or is he letting his overprotective desire to help his sister cloud his judgment?

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Shinedown's more like the old-fashioned radio detectives of old, who had a bad habit of skirting the law in the name of enforcing justice, and as such, he's got one TERRIBLE temper. And God Forbid you do make his sister Trixie cry!

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"Shinedown T. Mare is a hardworking peacekeeper for New York, waiting for his sister to arrive for a family weekend of sorts his boss has set up.
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"That's right. Shinedown's Trixie the Unicorn's sister. "

So is Shinedown a dude or a chick?


Also we know what episodes Trixie is in. You don't need to remind us.


And is that a gradient on your OC? Ugh.

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Why exactly are multicolored ponies an issue whatsoever considering we live in a world where Cupcakes and the Rainbow Factory exist?

2137869 Gradients are ugly, and the only pony who was a gradient is Cadance. No other pony has one, so it's out of place. It's like giving a character rainbow hair and then claiming she isn't related to Rainbow Dash - all it does is make your character look out of place.

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Of course he's meant to look out of place. His fur color is a magic paint job he gave himself to honor his dead partner, who had that exact same color. Everything about him is meant to be different from the norm of the show, from his backstory to his line of work to him becoming a single parent. I wanted to create a pony that was unique and different and not like the others. Evidently, you feel I went too far aesthetic-wise.

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