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Revenge of the Timberwolves

They say revenge is sweet, sweet to those that deal it to there enemies well what happens when a timberwolve hears that his three sons have been killed by a pony? Meanwhile another evil lurks in the shadows waiting to take the throne for himself? In the end who will be left standing?

(My first fic I hope not to fail and make this as interesting as I can I would really appreciate any feedback)

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Radiant Dawn

Radiant Dawn #1 · Feb 6th, 2013 · · · Prologue ·

Seems like it could be a decent story, but there's a few things you need to address. First of all, some major editing on grammar, sentence structure, and spelling needs to be done. Secondly, you need to choose first- or third-person perspective...and then stick with it. Fix those and you could have a very good story on your hands. Good luck.

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