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When Rainbow Dash decides that it's time to prove once and for all that she is the fastest pegasus in Equestria, things don't go as expected. By flying faster than time itself Rainbow will discover how Equestria would be like without her.

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I CAME.

Because of Pink Floyd. Not for the bad story.

THIS HAD BETTER HAVE PINK FLOYD

zel

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I actually googled that.

Why all of the hate?

I loved this story. It's getting a favorite, and you, my friend, have yourself a new follower.

Just a heads up- I saw several grammatical mistakes. You might want to read it over.

zel

2079587 It is way too fast and not descriptive enough IMHO.

That cover art seems familiar :rainbowhuh:

2079598

While that is true, it's still a great story, and I personally loved it.

(Joke) Alt. Title: Breaking Bad: Across The 1st, 2nd, 3rd And 4th Dimensions
The Dark Side Of The Moon? OK... (link)

I had a feeling The Power Puff Girls had something to do with this story :rainbowkiss:

'Speed Demon' is the name of the episode. Also was it 'HIM' that took over Equestria?

2079614 Good story, but still way to rushed. I could've seen better. Also, I wish they were chapters (Yes, I'm on my own here.)" because then there is suspense. Another thing.

“Oh, dear. She’s not going to be happy about this.”

Applejack is not the type of pony who would say "Oh dear." That would be Rarity, instead say something like "Oh crabapples."
Great story, don't get me wrong, I like the idea, the creativity, and how its educational. Do you mind if I use this for my essay... I still love this story, maybe a expansion?

2089907 What do you mean use it for your essay? The story or the idea? I have no ownership over the idea (it's not really mine since I already stole it from the Powerpuff Girls episode). The reason why it felt rushed was that I didn't want the story to be too long. I just wondered how the plot of the Powerpuff Girls episode - which is very short itself - would play out in the universe of My Little Pony. It was merely intended to be a short, stand alone kind of thing. I hope that it's not so rushed that it's unreadable. I have already moved on to work on a different project for now, but I'm getting better at writing in English, so perhaps my next story won't fell so rushed.

2097948 It was a joke.

did the theme from "back to the future" play when anyone else read how rainbow went back in time?

I get the Slice of Life tag, but why is it also tagged as comedy?
There weren't any moments that felt like they were meant to be funny.

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