Commence read.

It continues.

Now what does Cheerilee have planned and who else is going camping? Though the fact there is a tub at the school and she seems to help other students wash might give that away.

And then Cheerilee returned from camping and Rarity was never heard from again.

Waw, that was quick, wish i could update that fast.

Theres nire... though I believe that the dark tags is nit really nir the right choice, maybe sad is the best one..... keep going!!

Wow, a town full of pedo's... anyway nice story

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Hmm, personally, I don't view it as a vulgar word. It's certainly a filthy word, but when used correctly it makes a powerful sexual statement.

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Purple Smart knows what's what.

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Oh yes....I best she is the sweetest little filly....I want to taste her treats.....

Why is this marked complete ? Are you going to continue the story?

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Of course, next chapter is being written. A camping trip with the Cutie Mark Crusaders.

holy shit rarity! oh god i hope she doesn't do that to the CMC!

I feel like a bad person for reading this...

2082834 *headdesk* Pinkamena, I swear, if you do this again I'll stab your eyes out.
*sigh* Now I have to find a new Element of Generosity...

Whens the next chapter?

Rape

Thanks a lot, do you know hard it is to clean cum off an ipad screen? Really hard. But seriously, this was really good, I look forward to reading more. Thumbs up!

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Have you tried licking it off? I hear that works wonders.

I think I just found my new favorite foal. Sorry scootaloo.

This is tagged as Dark. By that, is it foalcon dark, or "Cupcakes" dark? I don't want to make the mistake of reading something akin to that abortion of a fanfic.

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I always tag any foalcon as Dark by default. This is somewhat abusive foalcon too, so I think it warrants the Dark tag.

And no, it isn't anything akin to Cupcakes.

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Oh! Well as long it isn't as abusive as "A Good Day" which almost made me want to beat the shit out of Rainbow Dash and the rest of the Mane 6, then I'd read it.

Fun stuff
Was hoping for a little physical abuse with the 'dark' tag and all, but great non the less
A very promising piece!

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Sounds like something I might enjoy. Link it, would you kindly

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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32332/a-fun-day
There you go, you sick fuck.

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A Good Day? What was that about, if you don't mind me asking?

Also, to togashi, I can see why some people would like this, but I just can't find myself liking this. Rape is one of my extreme hates, and I don't even know why I tried this, and then you made a teacher have thoughts about it, and I just can't stand it. I respect you, so i'll leave a thumbs up, but this just isn't my thing

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Pretty much the Mane 6(or most of them excluding Twilight I think. didn't read too much because I wanted to not rage quit FiMFiction.net) are the most abusive assholes to the CMC and Rainbow Dash is sick and tired of Scoots worshipping her and telling her that she loves her, so she decides to get the rest of the asshole Mane 6 to help her... kill Scoots. But it get much more worse than just killing her. Just read the Author's Notes and as much of the story you can stomach.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32332/a-fun-day

Whjy does sex have to be so bad and hurting..

MUST, HAF, MOAR

More indeed. Uh, not that I read it. Or liked it. Or thought about the camping trip at all.

(pokes with a stick) "..." (continues to poke with a stick)

sooo..... will there be an update?

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Yes, it's in the works now, just have been enjoying the weather.

Im torn between being proud of Cheerilee for not doing.

Or mad at her for kinda doing it.

Fuck

Just fuck

2284738 Thank you for that awesome story sir. It was a fun adventure after all!

The fact that I'm reading this is eating me alive inside, BUT I WANT TO KNOW HOW THIS ENDS!!!!!

Swiggety swooty, Cheerilee is comin' for that booty.

I'm relieved that Cherilee was actually being a school teacher and a responsible adult, but It's still kind of weird that she was touching herself

I... I just can't, I'll put it in read later, but I can't right now. Plz kill me...