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Twilight is corrupted by exposure to dark magic, and Celestia traps her in an extra-dimensional space called 'The Light Prison.' The Seam is a tear in space that is the exit to the Light Prison, but is usually invisible because the only thing that exists there is light.

A short story I wrote in late 2012 to accompany this piece of art I made. Yes, I drew the cover art. You can find it on my dA page here -- im-not-sue. Also featured on EqD drawfriends 653, #41.

This inspired me a little, when coloring -- link
It would be appropriate listening music, I think.

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Comments ( 16 )

I remember the art, now regardless if the story is the same as in the pics description or not will gladly re-read it. :pinkiehappy:

Its the same, I'm just posting it here too since I realized 'Well I guess that counts as a short story so I COULD upload up,, huh?'

Not bad. A bit too short though. The authors note is almost as long as the story.


The authornote is composed mostly of copypaste from the dA comments, which give a little more context without me having to retype it. I basically only wrote the story blurb to give context to the viewers of the picture so they knew what the concept I had was when I drew it. It is not meant to be a robust standalone story itself. I only posted it here because i figured that I could since it is a short story and someone might enjoy it.

You, good sir have earned yourself a like,favourite, and follow.:pinkiesmile: story comment: I would request MOAR of this story or MOAR stories like it:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Poor Twilight. Feels like White Rose...

Ah, well. I approve of this... rather sad story. It's nice.

Well that was indescribably depressing.

Fuck, and I was in such a motivated mood too

I enjoyed that, but so sad :fluttercry:

that was depressing to read.:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry:

that was very deppressing. I like dark or sad fics but that was just awfull. not bad writing but not really my kind of story.

Original and very good.
Nice read, thank you.

WHYY!!!! WHY IS IT DONE, WHY WHY,WHYYYYYYYYYY???? :raritycry: :raritydespair: :fluttercry: :fluttershbad:

well...this was a very good and very sad read.

The part that says, "Made entirely of light" Surprises me. It appears that in the cover, which depicts the prison, it is quite dim. Just pointing that out, and great story. Definitely sad, though. *Tucks away bottle of fake tears*

Very good work, a nicely done sad fic. :pinkiesad2:

Cool, wish there was more to it but it was nice no the less :twilightsmile:

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