wow four downvotes and no comments? this story was freakin creepy! thats for sure i noticed the romance tag um is there shipping in this? i couldn't tell i was too creeped out by the dash being treated like a baby thing to notice.
2129288 The number of downvotes has since increased. lol ^^
Thanks for your comment. I was going for a creepy atmosphere. So yeah, cool :)
I can think of a few reasons people might've votes this down: 1. It's a little rushed in places and not throughly edited enough. In retrospect a lot of the attention was given to the later parts/chapters... the opening feels a little rushed and the OC'a might not be evenly developed. I'm prolly gunna end up surpcing that up. 2. It's got adult content which isn't for everyone. 3. Some might find it unevenly paced, but that was intentional... I tried to avoid letting it drag, though ;)
To answer your question, there is a bit of implied Apple Dash stuff having gone on, but it's minor. The final part contains most of that, but I was having trouble with it so I'm still editing it. Thanks for pointing it out, as I might want to drop that for now. Dash also goes over to, well... connect with Rarity's client after the show, but that's not romance ;)
2131674 No problem it was rushed but it was an easy read it had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. i dont mind the implied appledash since its one of the many ships i enjoy. as long as the ship isn't the main focus of a dark story i am fine with ships in dark fics.
Those two sealed their fate the instant they decided to try and turn other ponies into adult foals. What they did was unforgiveable and wherever ponies go to when they die I can tell they'll most certainly go where the lowest of scum go.
2158230 It's a good thing that bronies are know for being so absolutely full of hate and unforgiving of such freakish hobbies, that no one will bat an eye at your comment. Yup, when I hear brony, I think 'vile hatemonger without any form of compassion inside'.
wow four downvotes and no comments? this story was freakin creepy! thats for sure i noticed the romance tag um is there shipping in this? i couldn't tell i was too creeped out by the dash being treated like a baby thing to notice.
2129288 The number of downvotes has since increased. lol ^^
Thanks for your comment. I was going for a creepy atmosphere. So yeah, cool :)
I can think of a few reasons people might've votes this down: 1. It's a little rushed in places and not throughly edited enough. In retrospect a lot of the attention was given to the later parts/chapters... the opening feels a little rushed and the OC'a might not be evenly developed. I'm prolly gunna end up surpcing that up. 2. It's got adult content which isn't for everyone. 3. Some might find it unevenly paced, but that was intentional... I tried to avoid letting it drag, though ;)
To answer your question, there is a bit of implied Apple Dash stuff having gone on, but it's minor. The final part contains most of that, but I was having trouble with it so I'm still editing it. Thanks for pointing it out, as I might want to drop that for now. Dash also goes over to, well... connect with Rarity's client after the show, but that's not romance ;)
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No problem it was rushed but it was an easy read it had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. i dont mind the implied appledash since its one of the many ships i enjoy. as long as the ship isn't the main focus of a dark story i am fine with ships in dark fics.
Rushed my flank this was great please tell me this is not over I must know what happened!
2136233 Thanks. I won't ruin it, however there is another part that I'm editing along with other stories. I like your icon, BTW. Pinkie is awesome :)
Thanks stole it form deviantart are you gonna update soon I gotta know what happens to Rainbow Dash and I love sad ending
2139448 Workin on it. Got it 95% done, just have to finish editing it and changing a few things around.
Those two sealed their fate the instant they decided to try and turn other ponies into adult foals. What they did was unforgiveable and wherever ponies go to when they die I can tell they'll most certainly go where the lowest of scum go.
2158230 It's a good thing that bronies are know for being so absolutely full of hate and unforgiving of such freakish hobbies, that no one will bat an eye at your comment. Yup, when I hear brony, I think 'vile hatemonger without any form of compassion inside'.
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It's not a hobby, it's an atrocity. A crime. Something unforgivable.