Apples in the Morning

[First Person Narrative]
I awoke today, finding the usual hangover besieging my mind. All seemed normal...
Until I found her lying next to me...

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CoAlFire

CoAlFire #1 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · ·

Apple Bloom?

Sex tag?

I'm not sure if I really want to read this.

I didnt change my name

I didnt change my name #2 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · ·

fantastic as always!

Velser

Velser #3 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · ·

Well shit...
My thoughts exactly

dragovin08

dragovin08 #4 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · ·

This story is a little weird to read but it's a meh, it's not too terrible to read it but it's nowhere near good either. It's a story just to read once and then never read it again. So a 4/10

Just to let you know my scale is 1: God awful , 5:average, 10: a masterpiece.

And you might want to fix one part: "entering the kitch." I don't get it is it a typo or something else.

TwizzleDragon

TwizzleDragon #5 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · ·

2098485
Oh sorry, that's slang, and it's apparently a word too, as google doesn't say it's incorrect.
Is that scale calibrated for random/troll fics?

dragovin08

dragovin08 #6 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · ·

2098505nothing to be sorry about I just didn't know.

Inferno demon Dash

Inferno demon Dash #7 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · ·

Huh, I'm not one for HIE but you're a very loyal fan so I chose to return the favor. This story is pretty funny, poor dude had no clue what hit him. Damn, was not what I weas expecting from the cover art but not bad, over all a 8/10 Great job.