Commence read.

They had some progress.

A continuation to this awesome story? You are awesome. Can't wait to see what the next part will be. And is that foursome like Bon Bon suggested going to be a future chapter?

Honestly, as soon as I read that they wanted to talk to Bon Bon and Lyra about their relationship, I knew Lyra would ask them about a foursome. xD

Wonderful chapter. I'm really curious to how the Apples and Sweetie's parents will react. I haven't seen much characterization to the latter before, but they seemed to be the laid back types when I saw them in the show.

I'd like to see that foursome Lyra mentioned...

2140559>>2140657>>2140840 The fourway has been set up as a potential bonus chapter for after the main story.

2142041 You are awesome. Do go on!

And now we wait..

DEAR FUCKING GOD!! WOW, that was awesome. and Rarity is now best wing-man.

2152131 Just wait until you see what I have planned for Chapter 3

2153045 ....squeeee.

2153045 I'm curious about chapter 3, too!

2163419 Thank you

Another hot chapter!

This is a great story.
Do you mind if I proofread it? I seemed to notice some grammatical errors.

2167888 Constructive comments are always welcome. I'm going to be going over and giving the story an overhaul at some point, so anything you notice would be helpful.

2167953 More content is comming. I've decided to split the next chapter into two parts, plus the bonus chapter. so a total of 3 more chapters to come.

You told us the "sexy scene" in the most detailed of ways possible. Well, from what I've seen so far. It's like you wrote every second of it (Which, basically you did).

Bravo.

*Hands Fimbulvinter cookies an a silver platter and places a party hat on his/her (Don't now, sorry.) head*

Now, invite Pinkie Pie over and it'll be one helluva party celebration for your incredible writing.

2168246 I've been told I have a very visceral and visual writing style.

I don't know about that. I just see a picture and start writing around it with enough detail that you could recreate the picture from the words.

Man you weren't kidding with the hardcore lesbian sex warning! (like!)
I tough how could a cute skinny dip result to something like that. Now i know

2171439 I don't kid when it comes to the content warnings of my stories and I willl be adding a few more with the next chapter.

Good to know you are enjoying it so far.

2171439 and knowing is half the battle

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I don't really have much to add other than that I agree with the complaints about character voice. It's well written for the most part, but a lot of the narration really doesn't sound much like Apple Bloom. Overall quite enjoyable though.

More. Now. Please?

2200907 This takes time, so you must be patient.

The best I can give you is soon and a glimpse of the next image in the sequence.
Inherently not safe for work.
Sweetie Bloom blowjob

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Who's the lucky bastard^H^H^H^H^H^H^H gentleman?

2203099 If you have looked at LunaismaiWaifu's art blog, then you should be able to guess based on the other images that are posted there.

2242042 It isn't finished. Chapter 3 is almost done, with Chapter 4 and an Epilogue planned to come.

Yeah more, pleeeeaaaasssse

2250096 I've finished writing the new chapter. Sending it off to the editors this afternoon

you did fantastic work with the plot development, i normally dont read clop because to be honest, normally the story dosent work well and its not very well written but this is the best i have ever read, it is fantastic

“It’s none of my business who you fall in love with Sweetie, as long as they make you happy. I had always hoped that it would be some handsome boy who would care for you, but the heart wants what it wants.”

A bit of a Mr. NPH quote I see? I think so!

wait........where is scootaloo does she have some sort of you know, profession sort of like a job that I don't know about.

Oooooh, that was a good one!

There aren't many clopfics that have made me laugh. This is one. Good job.

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Scootaloo on the other hand had retained a very small body, and generally appeared to be quite flat chested. She said that was good, as she needed to retain a very slim physique for her job as an acrobat.

first chapter but I had to relook at it so have a good day

2250898 You are a superb writer.

I haven't seen many clopfics that I have enjoyed that includes a good plot.

Well, I don't see what the Plot developing is doing... Seriously, I don't see any developed pictures of any Plot here. Do you guys?

P.S. Enjoy your present. It’s a gift from my ‘Back Room Collection’. I’ll be staying at Fluttershy’s tonight so you have the run of the place until tomorrow morning.

Didldo much?

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Technically its a strap-on.