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A dead pony is found in the Ponyville hotel, and Princess Celestia feels that the Equestrian police won't be able to solve this case. There is no doubt that the poor pony was murdered - a crime which Equestria hasn't seen for hundreds of years.

To solve this gruesome case, Celestia seeks the help of the genius detective L (from Deathnote). Together, he and her most faithful student, Twilight Sparkle, shall hunt down the criminal responsible. A task which will push all of them to their limits.

Author's note: I hope this will be more than a "Ponified L in Equestria" story. This is my first fan fiction and the first story I write in English, which isn't my native language. Please be lenient with me and my grammar. Corrections and criticism appreciated.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

Hey Feines! Long time no see! How are you?! I love love LOVE this story so far! Keep up the good work! :pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::heart::heart:

nice story, didn't read it but from the small burb it sounds cool.
I stumbled a crossed this because NYQUTIE told me about it, and I was interested in it. :pinkiehappy:

2070492 I hope I won't disappoint you :-)
It feels interesting to be "on the other side" for once.

2070653 Yeah, I hope you'll enjoy it. My stories do have the tendency to start rather slow and pick up pace really fast. So this chapter is more or less just a set up.

So far so good!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::heart::heart::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

Awesome chapter!

At first, when you e-mailed me about myself writing the story, I had NO idea who L or Death Note was. Turns out, my friend watches it, and when she showed it to me, I literally cried out when I read this chapter, "OMG, it's L!!! From Death Note!! DUH!!" xD Keep on writing, Feines. :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

~NYQUTIE

Okay, let me tell you some things that I noticed, Princess Celestia.

Light Yagami is in fact L's friend, but the one that killed L was Kira...

Light Yagami is Kira, but Kira is a whole other side of Light.

You can't see Light anymore when Kira killed L.

PINKIE AND HER PARENTS?!

YOU MEAN THE ROCK FARMERS!:derpyderp2::pinkiegasp:

I think Pinkie is the culprit... You know, with the "I know everypony" routine. It's always the most unsuspecting ones, and also I wonder why this party was better than the usual. Pinkie didn't hold any signs of affection (except the grinning wider and wider part and the fact that L has a mega-sweet tooth) so why is that?

3065457 I've actually never thought about Kira and Light being two individuals. But I kinda like that interpretation. Makes it even more dramatic..

You're right about Pinky's party. It shouldn't be better than her "usual" one. Maybe I should fix this.

Anyway, thanks for your input. I really appreciate it.

You will continue this story right? Right? :pinkiesad2:

3711551 Yes, definitely. I think I will post the next few chapters in about two weeks.

Sorry I take so long, but I have to finish another (non mlp related) story first.

3715355 That's fantastic to hear. You have a nice story here and it would have been a shame for it to be abandoned. Also no need for apologies, you have other priorities beyond this story to attend to, real life and such. Just nice to know this story lives. Have a happy new year :twilightsmile:

So Holmes, Jimmy Kudo, Conan Edogawa, and L in one place. Intriguing. But where is Hercule Puero? Or Ollie Chandler?

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