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looking good so far, though with a few errors
its actually picnic not pick-nick
also "I was in a state of dis pear"
that's spelled as dispair
"Pony Vile"
heheh
followin'
when will the next chapter be out?
great chapter! keep up the good work
great chapter, keep up the good work
great chapter once again! keep up the good work
there are a few errors but but they don't really bother me that much.
Hmm, before I read this, is this humanized, and what is the shipping?
If either one of these is met to my opinion, then I'll happily read it.
cant wait til' the next chapter
pretty badass squad
Thank you
It took some time for me to think of them all.
You may look forward to see them in art form. I am hard at work trying to put them in a far superior cover art.
Get some spell check on this chapter, maybe a proof-reader.
Hummm... It's beautiful.
Based on Shard's job description, I am going to say that he is a hypocrite.
2351388 Oh Ha! Thought I fixed that thanks.
dont understand did he popped it or nat
2468764 I'm sorry I don't understand now
2469234 i mean if he popped their ball or if he didnt popped it
2472742 Oh wow I feel dumb
Yes he did
2473006 you dont have to feel sorry, may i ask how did he popped it? i actually didnt understood his anatomy
2473321 Oh of course. The small shards that make him break off every now and again and are quite sharp unless altered manually. One of the shards popped the ball as it was floating around.
2473552 thanks for solving my doubts
by the way i love this fanfict ;D
Sweet! I almost forgot about this fanfic.
wow nice background story 5/5
that explains his abilities lol
Moar!
One minute she's asking his forgiveness, the next she warning him to stay away from her family.....
Moar!!!!!
Moar!!!!!
2590230 I thought the transition between her emotions were too sudden to be logical
2592040 Ah I understand now. Hopefully I can change it so it works better. I will also pay more attention when I work on this again in the future.
Thank you.
Hey man, can you accept an oc from me just like an acquaintance, someone who meets shard and becomes his friend.
2906058 Sent a message to me about the details.
2906677 name:dark ceremite
Race: thestral with slitted eyes and bat wings
Age:20
Fur white with black chain marks all over his body
mane:white with a black keyhole and the chain marks from his fur leading up to it,
eyes: glowing silver,
Profession:blacksmith, and scientest
bio: dark ceremite is the brother to light ceremite, he is the only one to notice that shard is not a regular pony and has been spying on him for a while, accidentally crashes into the library while shard is there and thats how he meets him(hopefully) he wants to make some armor for shard because thats the only nice thing he can do for him.
nice.
no doubt, he killed them all
I would hope he will now avoid and be wary of Fluttershy, after all, someone who uses her hypnotic and controlling powers on him would not exactly be trustworthy in his books. He never knows when she might strike after all......
And I sincerely doubt he can have much more than a mere shred of trust left in Twilight. She can't keep a secret, so he'll have to be careful in his words and actions around her in case he let's something slip that he would have rather kept a secret.
amazing story so far, now i remember why i liked this one so much
This is a unique and awesome fic. I love it
IT LIIIIIVESSSSSSSSSSS
Necromancy
was pretty InterestIng. Im enjoyIng It but wIshIng he dIdnt have a trench coat. That would be a much more strIkIng fIgure.
Well. I guess they just don't know how to treat him.
...what....how did he just learn the language in a matter of hours....
5365901 Split conscious among all the shards that where all trying to decipher the language.