A silly universty student who loves reading, writing, hockey, Disney, musicals, and ponies.
"What are we after all of our dreams, after all of our memories?" While trapped in the caverns beneath Canterlot, Cadence is caught between her desire to dream, and a reality she can not confront. Cadence battles with her own nostalgia, her love, and her hopes for the future while trying to find a way to escape her prison. But can her idealism overcome the power that Chrysalis holds over her?
Page generated in 0.116 seconds
Total duration
1,017 users online
2,132,247 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
That was very well written and very interesting, good job blending her dreams and reality.
2064944
Thank you for the praise
Remind me why am I supposed to feel sorry for Chrysalis and the Changelings? Attempted enslavement and physiological torture makes loose whatever sympathy I could have.
So in this one she looses it in the end... not that I can't blame her. You did good with this.
2080640
I'm not really trying to aspire much sympathy for the changelings. Really more trying to keep in character for Chrysalis, while using her for a symbol for the harsh nature of reality in general.
Thank you
I'm having a bad time of it and I think I really needed the token of praise.
2086459
I know you are not but there is so many fics that do and at the same time vilify the ponies for trying to stop the invasion or fighting back. You did keep her in character, she did try to go after Twilight and think even Celestia.
And you are most welcome
Would have been stronger without the song from Les Miserables, I think. That was mostly just distracting.
The jumps from dream to reality often caught me off guard
, but I think it's just because I read too fast 
. Quite liked the story, though I kinda wished it ended with Twilight coming in, making continuity between this story and the show 
.
... Yeouch... that is... harsh. Harsh and powerful.