• Member Since 2nd Dec, 2011
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Phil Srobeighn


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One band. Four mares. Eight wings.

One night. Thousands of fans. Ten minutes to curtain.

One story. 1,337 words. 100 percent dialogue.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Loving that band name. It's pretty hard to read a 100% dialogue, but I understood it relatively well. I liked that part with the "shoulder massagers", also Fluttershy trying out harsh vocals? Sounds awesome. :yay:

That had to be one of the best 100% dialogue things I've ever read.

Excellent job bringing across all their personalities through dialogue alone. Very well-written and fun.

(Do I detect a Scott Pilgrim reference in that last line? :raritywink: )

Well done my good sir. Just, well done.

Well this story is 1337-wait a second? Whats this its 1418? What does that spell? :twilightoops:

The computer I'm at right now can't do reply, but to address the above: yes, I was going for a Scott Pilgrim feel for the call in by the girl drummer, and I don't know why FimFiction puts this as 1418 (Laib?) words, but Word had it at 1337.

Awesome story. Nice idea, the 100% dialogue thing made it a little hard to understand, but I could read it anyway. Would have liked to see something else, but it's your story, and you choose its fate. Great work anyway :twilightsmile:

Very cool stuff, there were one or two spots where it was hard to tell how many ponies were talking and who was talking but still a solid fic. :) I'm guessing the ponies are Dash, Derpy, Fluttershy and Scoots?

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