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Snowfrost


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After Frost Nexus lost his father to a strange and unknown disease, it took its toll on both him and his mother. In a desperate need for a change of scenery, they both picked up their roots in Canterlot and moved to Manehatten. Frost, a young unicorn colt, was unsure of his new surroundings, and was very lost in his new home. He then runs into Neon Lighting, a young pegasus filly, and become fast friends.

But as time goes on. Will they stay just friends? Or will they become something much more to each other?

This will be my first story, so criticism is appreciated.
Special thanks to Kodeake for helping edit and pre-read, as well as helping me with the more mushy parts.
Cover art courtesy of the awesome Ms. Kaokay, go check her out guys she's a great artist.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

This is good, you just need to add more chapters.

4233222 Why thank ya. I'll be sure to get them chapters out as fast as I can, but finals are coming up and I've gotta work hard if I'm gonna pass em. XD

4234408 You could always try to write faster. When I write new chapters to my fics, I can usually get 1000-2000 words in an hour.

4234561 Well, my number one problem is that I'm just a lazy piece of crap. XD

Nice chapter, now can we have another?

4376162 Maybe. If you're good. :pinkiehappy:

4379492 I am good, now give me another chapter.

4379492 Still waiting for more...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

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