My name is Nevar a man without my left arm I have no life no friends and no fun, but my life gets turned around when I get sucked into a land of...ponies? I don't know whats going on but at least they still have video games like on earth maybe this is for the best I don't know. I guess I'll find out as I restart my life in this new world.
I'm fairly new at this whole story thing so feel free to give me some constructive criticism on it. and by that i mean correct some things that I might have missed in a message
I have an editor and credit should go to her now that I can have better grammar and more info.
Chapters (6)
Suck My Balls....
just felt like saying that
came
for the comments.
all comments were just about dude get an editor or spellcheck
well I got one so shut your muzzle
having an oc week message me your pony tell me whether good guy or bad guy, what powers and I'll add them to the story
hope to Nevar give up
Here are some thing you should do
1. Get a new editor(yourself does no count)
2. Get a new spell check
But in all seriousness, how can you be this bad in grammar.
Seriously, to many fragments and spelling errors
That cover picture is fucking glorious.
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all those photos in this story can be found on my deviantart page
http://claw-cannon.deviantart.com/
hope to Nevar give up
*le generic your grammar sucks comment here*
Don't mind me, just passing through.
Yes I am joking.
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cause this is an epic fail on my part
eeyup I'm bad AT THIS STUFF Ican't believe that i thought I could do this but noooo I should just change my catchphrase to Cannon is not Canon
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Practice makes perfect, just keep trying you'll get there eventually.
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care to elaborate on what was the grammatical error or errors in this story
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Do you know what sarcastic means?
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do you know what photoshop is because I could do a better job than you
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Touché
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OK for some reason comments are being deleted don't know don't care
2307842 I seems not many people like your story.
I will give it a like for the hake of it I'm not a hatter.LET'S SEE A SMILE!