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Lyra has always fantasized about becoming a human, and walking amongst their culture. One day, she decides for the dream to become a reality, and become one with the people. When she convinces Twilight to preform a powerful spell on her, the unexpected happens.
Chapter 4 is currently being written!

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Do Lyras POV in the next chapter as a human in a human world

>Pertaining to when the protagonist gets sucked into equestria and swapping bodies

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The fanfic is gonna stay in 3rd person, however I did write Lyra's POV, technically :derpytongue2:

This is going to be interesting.
Lyra got her wish.

Intriguing. Will reserve judgement.

I've read this kind of story a few too many times already, but I'm up for another round. Let's do this.

This is going a bit quickly, but I'm intrigued. What is the Lyra/Bon Bon relationship like in this incarnation? How will Alicia fare? Will Celestia solve all the problems ASAP? And what of Lyra?

Waiting to see more but so far it's doing a decent job of exploring this concept. However I have a few questions. How are Twilight and Lyra friends? How did Lyra learn the spell she used? What was Alicia'w life like before this happened?

This story is very interesting.

Awesome the human protagonist is a girl. It's pretty rare these days... sadly.

Mistake here:

I don't know much of them besides that she describes them as being 'perfect, pure beings.'

I don't know much of them besides that she describes them as being 'perfect, pure beings."
There should've been an end quotation mark along with the single one, since this is the end of a sentence.

A voice told Lyra where she is? That's not good.

Well, at least it's even about how both the girls are in trouble to pretend to be the other person.

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:twilightoops: Whoopsie, which chapter is that in?

Uh, just one little thing. It's 'perform', not 'preform'. But other than that, a great story :pinkiehappy:

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Yes, I'd have thought that the very first question on Twilight's mind: "Where's Lyra?"

will there be more or will i be sad that another intresting story is gone forever

Chapter 4 is currently being written!

'You're in the world of humans.'

And thus the Apocalypse began

Wait, show !?

Of course

"Uh, hello?" Lyra spoke quietly. The chatter continued.

This is going to be awkward I just know it

"Yes, we shall. Do not worry about my other duties, Twilight Sparkle. There is plenty of time for a situation like this." Luna turned around and Twilight held the door open for them as they went out.

Then Luna beat her to death with her own Lyre, causing a feedback loop that also killed Lyra, thus ending the fic forever.

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