~ FINALLY COMPLETE ...~
Its Rainbow Dash her birthday and everypony is happy...
Of course everypony has a present for her :D
Pinkie Pie gives Rainbow Dash : The PonyGamer 730!!!
Rainbow Dash is so happy with all the presents she got from her friends ,but she's excited to play the newest PonyGamer 730
She plays with it all day long...and even longer.
Twilight and the rest of the gang are worried that Rainbow Dash is a litlle game - addicted.
Rainbow Dash doesnt come out of her house and sits a whole week inside her house.
But suddenly...on one pieceful day,Rainbow Dash loses it.
Shes gone crazy and is mentally insane that she's causing chaos and danger in Ponyville.
Are Twilight , Fluttershy,Pinkiep pie,Applejack and Rarity Be Able To Stop This Madness?
Or is it...Game Over?
The story was good but a little friendly advice, you might want to change the rating from everyone to Teen because of the blood and gore from Derpy.
But besides that the story was good. 
252236 Thanks for the advice
Me is on it ^^
Four words you never want to say when you fear something bad may happen: What can go wrong. Every time someone says that what happens? They learn just what can go wrong and how wrong it can get! Amirite?
254797 RIGHT AS A WHISTLE
I loved it
