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The cycle of destruction is broken and the galaxy is safe. But its hero, its savior, will never return. Although they won't forget him, they have also seen him for the last time. It's not easy being a hero because just when they think they can be at peace, they are called to action again. The hero thinks that he can rest, that his death is upon him, but death will not come so easily to those who are needed. As fate would have it, he is needed again, in a world that could not be more unlike his own. He is, or perhaps will be, needed in the world of Equestria.

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This was never actually meant to be published, I just never finished it before I realized that no one reads fanfics anymore, here it is!

You need an editor.

no one reads fanfics anymore

News to me:rainbowhuh:?

"I'm going to keep these weapons with me."

"Yeah... I don't think so lady. You didn't even know what the hell they were, I'm not going to leave my guns with you. Especially due the simple fact that they are advance technology and I would be introducing you to something beyond your means of current understanding or care."

"You dare speak to the Princess like that?!"

"Look buddy, unless your Princess is a swarm of 2 kilometre ships, has the ability to mentally mind rape people, and has been committing xenocide for the past 1 million plus years on a galactic scale, I can speak to whoever I want, however I want."

No offense man, but I doubt Shepard would just hand his weapons over willy nilly like that. Not because he is a bad ass, but because there will be little doubt in his mind something could happen to them if he wasn't there. Princess or no.

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He's been knocked around pretty good, can't run, can hardly stand, what's he gonna do, say no to her? Also I'd think that this Shepard would be somewhat respectful to alien authority, he doesn't know anything about these species, speaking poorly about the princess might get him killed for all he knows. He's a bad-ass for sure, but he's no renegade (spoiler).

so far i like this very much :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile: keep it up and i am going to follow you:twilightsmile:

So does this mean you eon't continue this story? Because I don't want to read another ME crossover if it's just going to be cancelled or kept unfinished.

I would like this fic if it went deeper into the imagery and references to biblical text, such as the "Shepard", and took this much-overdone crossover in a fresh direction into many of the overlooked aspects of the game trio. However, It could still use much work if you want to define yourself away from all of the other failed attempts at connecting this tricky crossover.

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Not to mention that this is a first-contact scenario, where it's his duty to represent the best side of the Citadel races.

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I'll continue it if I find enough motivation

3084867 Still though after what happened between the Salarians and the Krogen... Handing advanced technology to the ruler of a less advanced civilization would make the ruler mandate attempts to reverse engineer said technology so that she could end up in a similar situation to the Krogen. Advanced technology yes, understanding no. Hope that doesn't cause another Genophage if Celestia tries such a thing... You know what they say, curiosity killed the cat. :pinkiecrazy:

i thought omni tools were surgically implanted since in the game there are times where he is not wearing his gloves or clothing that covers his arms. also what class is he adept, sentinel, engineer, soldier, inflitrator. also love the story.

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My thoughts exactly, I wouldn't give a gun to a child, and that is exactly what Celestia is when it comes to advanced equipment, Princess or no, because she lacks the understanding necessary to safely use, store, and care for it.

Not to mention that you can bet your ass the Alliance has regulations about military equipment in the hands of foreign powers. Especially pre-spaceflight foreign powers.

It's pretty suspension-of-disbelief-breaking, to be honest.:facehoof:

3084867 He can be polite about it, but he's not going to let them have his weapons that easy.. surely not.

It's against the prime directive. :P

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3084041 ...........There's thousands of people writing and reading stories for this website alone....

People don't read fanfics!? pfft. Just about every person with a computer reads fanfics.

So do you guys think I should really change that? Or is it something we can deal with?

3089076 it something that HAS to be changed. Shepard is respectful, but we seen what happens when someone's tries to take his weapons. In Noveria, the paragon route show that he will stand down, if only to keep the peace and with out bloodshed.

This matter is different though.

This is a society that is ancient compare to the rest of the galaxy, and while their leader is old and wise, she doesn't understand what she attempting to do in securing them. There could be dozens of safety hazards in handling the weapons, we don't know what they would do with them if they get curious.

Shepard won't be impress with her age, he seen older.

Shepard won't be impress with their forces, he seen better.

Probably be impressed with magic, but given all that he seen, it would last about a minute before it becomes old news for him.

The whole sun and moon issue itself would no doubt leave him perplex. And given that he is human, he would no doubt ask the question that many ponies seem to ignore: Why? Why endanger a world like that? What happens to this world if something happen to you and your sister?

We already seen Celestia be defeated once, proving that she is not an all powerful goddesse, but more like an experience Asari Matriarch, powerful, but still can be defeated....or Reapers.

3089076 DUDE. CONTINUE THIS! I love where this is going and I WANNA SEE MOAR!!! Pwease? :fluttercry:

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I think I might have a way to make them both happy.

3084298>>3089233 Yes. These ones speak the truth.:twilightsheepish:

Cool story though.

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It's gone through at least one editor, said editor not being myself. But a couple of the line spacing is wrong, courtesy of uploading from google docs.

Chapter 2 has been edited.

This is the best ME crossover I've read in quite some time. Hope you finish it!:twilightsmile:

saw the N7 logo, knew ME crossover. Read the comments, not so sure I want to read...

3090185Technically, Shepard has and hasn't. Benezia, the Asari Matriarch from ME1, was said to not even be 1,000, as Asari live to be around 1,000 years old. You could justify that the Reapers (seeing as how they're well over 1,000,000 years old) are the oldest beings Shepard has ever met, but they tried to purge all life from the galaxy.

Still, besides the Reapers, Celestia is the oldest being he's ever met. She's definitely over 1,000 years old, which blows the one Matriarch's age out of the water.

I really want to see how his ends.

And follow and im gonna get email updates for this stuff.

Everything was going to be fine.

WRONG.

:facehoof: Foreshadowing I somehow hate you.
The reapers are gone, I mean, how else can Shepard get out of the Crucible alive? The only other options were definitely reaper existent ones and Shepard being relatively dead. So in the end, if Reapers are appearing I'll be sure to be confused.

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Spoiler alert, the reapers aren't appearing.

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I know but the foreshadowing is annoyingly placed there, and since it's a crossover, majority of the time, it's the visitor's problems that get inside before the home.

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"You must realize it's standard procedure."

"It's my standard procedure to keep my gun."

3092698 better. Not sure if they just left them there though. Still, I doubt it will work out they way she wants it.

Do you need help man, its really hard to read this sometimes because how disjointed it is.

I hope you eventually show how much more powerful Humanity is than the Ponies and instill a sense of respect because I hope to shit this won't be one of those "Magic is might" stories.

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3099048 so you know what happens if Celestia pisses him off >:D

God you're all reading this instead of Symphony of Destruction? What the hell is wrong with you people!?

we think this is awesome :pinkiesmile:

This honestly does not sound like the commander shepard I know

Good story. I'd say have him stay in Equestria but with the mention of a loved one back home that seems unlikely. Please just keep Equestria out of any conflicts from ME. If possible I'd rather nobody finds out Equestria even exists other then Shepperd himself.

Please continue this story before its lost..:fluttercry:

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I enjoy it:twilightsmile:, and I don't want to see this story forgotten or canceled:applecry:.

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When everyone goes and reads "Where did I go wrong"

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