Story about Applejack, Apple Bloom and their apple trees.
The illustrations were done by Mao Ookaneko.
This is a translation of my original story written in my native language, which is Czech. If you are interested in the original you can find it under this link.
I'm not a native English speaking author and translating this was like a nightmare, but I tried my best and I hope it's not that bad.
And I would be glad for anyone or anypony willing to do a little editing.
Well... on the translation side I can't see anything obvious, so it appears that those efforts are working. The funny thing is with large amounts of fanfiction I have read at times it is non-native English speakers that have a better grasp of English than many native speakers. With the story itself well you've got my attention with the artwork. I'll keep reading if you keep writing.
-Celesita's Paladin
Don't worry about it your doing good so far, I'm pretty interested where you take this
I liked the end because it was exciting.
That was amazing love that pick
I hope there's more to this story. Just when it was getting good, it ended.
It’s dead isn’t it
Edit: the story I mean