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Prince Solstice
My dick maybe large, but really only in your heads. I'm quite the average guy, from day to day life, I seek answers only to get more questions. And yes, I am that guy who fucks mothers.
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I thought this story would be one of those funny random stories.
I have never been so wrong.
Well, after reading I have come to a conclusion.
It's OK.
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In other words, you never caught my attention, it wasn't that funny, and it made me unable to comprehend simple mathematics.
Like I said, it's OK.
I don't really have a picture to put here, so enjoy my vague feedback.
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2049836 I don't know what mathematics had to do with this story. It was deffinately random to begin with, and really not meant to be a serious clop fic. I don't really care if this is bad or not, I was bored and wanted to write something for today.
I liked it.
2049993 Thanks
So now Twilight has turned into a quill.
Perhaps Pinkie Pie will turn into an oven?
2050364 I think Pinkie Pie should turn into one of those icing/frosting dispenser tube... thingies. You know what I mean, right?
2050400
I can't decide if I'll do some more of these or not. We will see.
Please put spaces between the paragraphs. It'll make it easier to read.
2050557 I always had a problem doing that, I felt like it was too much space then. If ya really want me to I guess I can, but in normal novels they don't double space in between paragraphs.
I'm fine without spaces between paragraphs, as long as you properly indent (which you do).
Also, this is not at all what I expected. It's better. I will now go have more.
2050668 Yea, I find use in the tab key. Also thanks, I am actually surprised these stories are doing so well.
2050400 Maybe.
Also I wonder if anyone other than the mane six will be turned into random items. Like what if Big Macintosh got turned into an apple tree or a plow.
2052093 It requires a certain amount of irony to create these. Maybe not in Rarity's or Dash's case, because I didn't write those.
It's funny what weird s*** you find when you tick the mature and sex boxes, and specifically cross out the romance box.
2052317 That was the goal, create a non-serious clop fiction. It scares me that I actually might do good at a regular clop.
2052397
There was a goal? Thought you were just bored
2052413 Eh, that is semi-right. I was bored, but boredom often compels people to do weird things. So I wanted to write a non serious clop fic. That was the goal, and I was originally inspired to write these because of Rarity becoming a toaster. It made me laugh a lot more than what I thought it would.
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Link maybe?
2052434 and link you shall receive.
2052451
Aight, thanks. What's the first thing I do there? Make fun of someone who spelled 'canon' as 'cannon'. *sigh*
2052463 nah, just accept it. It's an interesting read.
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I'm already reading it lol.
Twilight should have had more control. No amount of pleasure is worth a broken tip!
2130431 The series didn't really start out with them having control. That was kinda the point, and I just followed the trend.
2131591
Shhh, don't comment to the comment, that's the joke.
Or maybe it isn't.
It was a good story either way.
This read like a financial statement more than a story in that nothing was shown and everything was told in bland, unengaging language. I can't willingly suspend my disbelief when a pony turned quill retains sight, touch, and hearing but can neither speak nor move just to facilitate the plot. You try to take refuge in silliness, but a silly story has to be entertaining and well written to excuse its logical discrepancies. This was neither.
2276236 Alright, I appreciate the abuse, finally someone explains why this might not work. However, sir,I do hold the right to say one thing. You have to have a suspension of disbelief in order to read stories of any kind, especially ones featuring ponies. Now I will respect your opinion and give you that this isn't necessarily well written by any means. I didn't put a lot of effort into things I write just because I can, which means sometimes these are going to have things to be desired. If you would so kindly as to read something else I've written, because I do not claim these to be my best stories, they are just popular due to being a unique concept. Plus I wrote this a while ago, I'd like to think I've gotten better because of feedback like yours. So thanks /)
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I love a good scathing review, so you're welcome to return the favor. We writers already have blurred barriers between imagination and reality, so disbelief isn't usually an issue. The clinical language and lack of sensory details were greater barriers to immersion than the logical discrepancies. As it so happens, though, I have read some of your other stories, and I remember enjoying the one where Vinyl became a set of headphones.
2277292 Like I said this is rather old, and I was really just starting to get into writing with detail. I realize the importance of it and now I wish I could go back and rewrite these. Maybe I will when I have some free time this spring break. As for returning the favor, I might. Again thanks, I love good feedback of any form.
i like this alot
Pretty good story lol
I know this is an old story but it still makes absolutely no sense
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Imo, clopfics -- especially ones involving Discord -- don't really need to make sense.
Good work! Definitely an interesting POV to write from!