"Are you coming?" Sweetie shouted from the end of the ramps.
"Yeah... yeah," Dim shut the door behind him. He noticed that Sweetie Belle was getting ahead of him, so he trotted quickly to her. That "rest" Dim took did help his leg a little, it didn't hurt to walk now, but he was sure that if he ran or stretched his leg too much, that it would start to hurt again. He now caught up with Sweetie Belle.
"Hey, um... I have a question," Dim said uneasily.
"What is it?" Sweetie replied.
"Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, are they usually like that?" Dim didn't know much about those fillies but he didn't think that they were type of ponies that would go these great of lengths just to embarrass him, or whatever they were trying to accomplish.
"Like what?"
"You know, like, making traps and stuff?"
"Well, no. Not at all actually, they've never tried to hurt us, other than calling us names, and they never set a trap like that either. You must have made them really mad or something." she answered. "Also, I forgot to ask, why did Diamond punch you?"
"Wait, you saw her punch me?" Dim's tone changed slightly.
"Yeah, that's when we decided to come help you. We all thought you could take them both." she replied.
I could easily take them both, he thought. "Okay," Dim said. "Well turns out they almost fooled me twice..." Dim began to blush a little.
"What do you mean?" They continued their way through the woods.
"Well, first she asked if would...." Dim took a breathe. "Kiss her-" Dim didn't get to say another word.
"WHAT!" Sweetie's voice cracked as all the birds flew out of the trees in a panic of crowing and chirping.
"Wait, wait, wait I didn't kiss her of course calm down. Now, I didn't believe her at all so I started to look around to see if she was up to something. After looking around I realized they were trying to do what they did last time, only they were gonna take a picture or something. Silver Spoon was gonna take a picture, she was hiding in the same bush. Tell your friend to put a bear-trap in there by the way."
Sweetie laughed at his joke.
"Anyway, I threw a rock in the bush and it hit her." Before he could start his next sentence, Sweetie spoke up.
"Wait a minute. You threw a rock at Silver Spoon?" Sweetie's mouth fell open.
"Yeah, why?" Dim asked, but was answered with a hug. "Um..."
A tear came to Sweetie's eye. "I've been wanting to do that forever." she said while hugging him.
"Glad I could help-" Just as Dim began to close his eyes and enjoy the moment, Dim's breath was stolen when 10 feet away from him, was the creature from his nightmare. Just standing there, menacingly. It continued to only stare at Dim. "AHHHHHHHHHH!" Dim shoved Sweetie away, she stumbled. He himself fell to the ground in a panic.
"What is it!" Sweetie said with an angry and annoyed expression.
Dim, eyes closed, whispered so softly. "Be-behind y-you."
Sweetie slowly turned her head, sweat beginning to drip from her forehead. She finally completely turned around. "There's nothing there you whack-o!"
Dim slowly opened his eyes, shivering. He looked at where he saw the demon. "It was right there a second ago!" Dim was in disbelief, mouth a gap. Dim, in a flash was now next to Sweetie Belle. "Can w-we just get out of these wo- woods?" Dim stuttered.
"You're such a fraidy cat Dim," Sweetie sighed. "We're almost out anyway." Sweetie continued to walk with an annoyed expression.
"I'm sorry, I'm probably just seeing things," Dim said. "Okay," Dim calmed down, "do you want to know more about what happened?"
"Of course."
"Okay where was I? Oh yeah! Okay, so after the I threw a rock at Silver Spoon," a smile came back to Sweetie Belle's face, "she jumped out with the page-" Dim just realized something, he didn't have the page on him. "I left the page in the club house!"
"Do you wanna go back and get it?" Sweetie asked.
"No, just, whenever one of you three gets your hooves on it, bring it to me. Keep it in a safe place until then." There's no way Dim was gonna stay another un-need second in those woods, not even for the page, plus he trusted those three to keep it safe.
"Okay, so anyway, after she jumped out with the page I ran over to her to grab it and long story short I chased her down and got it back." Dim finished his summary of the previous events.
"Well anytime that those two ever tried something like that on us, they would send somepony else to do it. They've never done something like that one their own." Sweetie told Dim.
"They send other ponies to do their dirty work for them?" Dim questioned.
"Well yeah,"
"I'll keep that in mind." he noted. The two ponies were now out of the woods and back at the farm. "So, where are your friends?" Dim asked as looked turned his head left and right.
"They were in the barn last I checked."
"Okay," Dim Shadow said. They began to make their way to the barn. Dim opened the barn doors to find many animals, pigs, cows, chickens, etc.
"Help!" a voiced cried from above "Help!" Dim looked up but couldn't see anypony. "Over here!" Dim looked up even further, to see Scootaloo and Apple Bloom hanging from a support beam with a single piece of rope suspending them from the waist. They were slowly spinning.
"How did you even manage to get up there!?" Dim shouted from below.
"Just get us down!" Scootaloo yelled in response.
"What the hay?" Sweetie Belle said, entering the barn. Dim pointed to her swaying friends up above. Sweetie burst out in laughter.
"Gee, thanks Sweetie Belle. We're glad to see you here to help." Scootaloo sarcastically said, unamused.
"How are we suppose to get you down?" Dim asked.
"I don't know, think of-" The support beam was starting to crack, unable to hold the fillies much longer. "Oh dear." was all they both could say, before they began to fall, screaming.
"I got you!" Dim quickly looked at Sweetie, "get Apple Bloom!" Dim positioned himself under where Scootaloo was falling just in time to catch her, heart pounding. Sweetie Belle also got to Apple Bloom just in the nick of time, catching her. Scootaloo opened her eyes slowly, now realizing that she was okay and not hurt.
"Nice catch." Scootaloo said laughing to hide her embarrassment for the stupid thing she did.
"I can't believe y'all caught me Sweetie Belle. I didn't think you were strong enough to do that. Thanks." Apple Bloom said.
"What were you two even trying to do?" Dim asked confused. He had no clue how it was even possible to get up there.
"I don't wanna talk 'bout it." Apple Bloom said rather slowly.
"Scootaloo, what were you trying to do?" Sweetie asked tilting her head to the right.
Scootaloo swiped some dust of her. "Uh, it doesn't matter, so what you wanna do?" she asked Sweetie Belle.
They all thought for a second, Apple Bloom was first to speak out, "We could go back to the tree house and-"
"No!" Dim shot up almost instantly.
"Why?" Apple Bloom questioned.
"Just... just because." Dim replied looking at the ground.
"Tell us why." Apple Bloom said
"Does it matter?" Dim said, avoiding eye contact with her.
"To me it does, now tell me." Apple Bloom started make it sound more like a demand.
Before Dim could open his mouth to say no again, Sweetie spoke.
"He had a bad dream about a monster, and now he thinks it's real and following him." Sweetie rolled her eyes, then Apple Bloom began to laugh.
"Seriously?" she kept laughing. "Y'all scared if a 'lil nightmare." she paused for a second.
"Stop," Dim Shadow was getting annoyed.
"I just can't believe it, out of all the things you could get scared of, a silly bad dream has got your tail in a twist."
"Stop," Now Dim was getting frustrated.
"I'm just sayin' you was almost beaten up by those two colts, and this silly little thing is the worst that's happened to you."
"You know, I could," he stressed the word "could". "put you back up there, dangling and somepony might not catch you next time if you were to fall." Dim said, looking Apple Bloom dead in the eyes. He didn't like being made fun off, no matter who it was. All three of the crusaders now looked at Dim with the did he just say that? face. "What? I'm just saying."
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Just.. Stop
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the smegma addict is right, brony hectic
2760546 It is like custard
2760551
maybe hectic will put smegma-related clop in his fanfic, thus making it original content
pretty sure nobody in the mlp fandom has done smegma fetish yet
and you must be dying to rub one out
2760531
2760554 no, I don't plan on any clop.
2760546>>2760531 Can you guys suggest any changes to make the story better?
2760755 Write it in English, Preferably starting the description
2760962 Where are my grammar errors? I know I'm the best with it and that really annoys me.
2760975
Read it again,
2761284 After reading this I had to lay down and count to 10 because I was so mad at myself. Thank you for bringing this up, I can't believe I didn't notice it. I'm going to change it immediately.
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2761438 That man is my hero.
2761446
You will burn a Heretic for not believing in me
2761450 I believed in you, time to believe in me. I believe you should hit ze like button.
2761464 Only the best will receive likes from me, You should consider getting editors, pre-readers, and proof readers if you desire my support, I may then decide to do some voice acting for it,
2761752 I hear you. I have had editor's before, but they usually take too long or never get it done. I pre read, (probably not the best at it. If I had an editor that would only take like a day or two to get the job done then hell I'd let them be my editor.
2763214 Two pre readers are also a necessity
2764858 you seem to think pretty highly of yourself .....
tone it down a bit
2774170 But I am great, You my friend should work on your confidence!
2774766 i have confidence in my own abilities but i find it rather annoying when others flaunt themselves to make them look better than they really are.
now please as i said before tone it down
2775472 May I ask why there was 20 notifications?
2775781 sorry bout that my pc decided to have a small stroke and it posted my comment about 20 times
2775472 I do not flaunt myself to make myself seem better than I actually am, I am this good, And if you do not like the fact I am proud of mine own abilities and personality.
Then you can go and
i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/7527405312/h24E58D30/
Or, More family friendly
This!
Do I make myself clear son?
2776725 though i don't believe you those 2 pics had me laughing for about 20 minutes
2776767 I do not require your believing me,
I am lauded as the master of the GIF war here on fimfiction
Also
Fix the grammar, It hurts
2776980 Sorry about the grammar. I had to type that out quickly, I was going somewhere with my family
2776143 I'm going to block you if this keeps happening.
2780081 sorry like i said my pc is shit