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walk-in closet brony


I'm a closet brony... I mean, if thats ok.

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The Elements have gone missing, and it's up to the mane six to get them back! Trouble is, they've been placed randomly throughout humanities darkest days of warfare. Now Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Applejack must traverse the course of history, our history, and retrieve their respectable element before it's lost forever . . . Over there.

(Title inspired by the song)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 170 )

Yeah! First chapter is up!:yay:

Hope you guys enjoy this as much as I will writing it! I'm a huge history buff and love giving lectures to people about significant battles. Especially some that most don't know about.:twistnerd:

Oh well, I hope you enjoy, comment, and like!
(Any of those make me happy:twilightsmile:)

P.S. I apologize for that weird spot where the others are giving praise to Twilight before she leaves. I can't fix it. :ajsleepy:

Which war or time period is she going to

Over there.
Over there.
Spread the word, we are going over there.

I couldn't help it. :twilightsheepish: Anyway, this story has potential, it would be interesting to see the main six in different periods of human warfare. I'll definitely be keeping an eye one this. :pinkiehappy:

Oh boy. I wonder if any of them will get sent to the FOOOOTUUUURR!?!?!?? Probably not....

Hmmm... What wars/battles will be here... Stalingrad?

2047136>>2047475>>2047544- Each of the mane six will be traversing the course of history trying to locate their element in a different conflict during a different time period. Battles aren't limited to those that involve guns . . . but yes, maybe Stalingrad.:twilightsmile:

2047205-Lol, listened to that song while writing the chapter.:twilightsheepish:
And yes, the mane six will be in different time periods, each going through their own hell.:pinkiehappy:

. . . Johnny get your gun, get your gun, get your gun . . .

5$ Laughter is in the great depression.

2049617-Oh my god I see what you did there!:rainbowlaugh:

Good beginning, if a bit rushed. I'll follow.

2049775-Skipped introductions. Skipped introductions everywhere.:trollestia:

2050999-I did too!:twilightsmile:
I wanted to cover this bit of warfare on this site seeing as though many others have tried before, yielding results that are less than satisfactory. Sometimes other writers try to portray combat in history but either overdue it or undersell it.

I wanted to try my hand at it and see if I could do any better!:twilightsheepish:

why i have feeling that Rainbow will be on omaha beach....

Woohoo! Battle of the Somme river FTW.:yay:

Enjoy, comment, and like.:twilightsmile:

The opening is a bit rushed but the battle scene captures the brutality, ugliness and just horror of trench warfare.

So what time periods are you gonna be hitting?

Will you go to a "near future" war (2016-2021) or will you be restricting yourself to 20th century and before?

Reminds me of that game called Warefare 1917.

Can we see Applejack in Iraq and Rainbow Dash in Vietnam?

2054766-Probably not going into the future, so yeah, I'm just going to hit past wars. Thanks for the praise about my depiction of combat.:ajsmug: I tried as best as I could, but no one can truly ever know unless you've been there.
2054833-Hah! I've totally played that.:yay:

2054887-I actually had other plans for them, but maybe I can work something out . . . :twilightsheepish:
2054918-Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

2054945 I'm curious. Are any of them going to end up in the Crusades? Or is that too far back/undocumented enough to use?

2054945 Pimkamena would do so well helping the
C.I.A. "interrogate" their "prisoners", though she would have to be held back sometimes...:pinkiecrazy:

I don't care who, but I require at last one Stalingrad chapter. I mean... If thats okay with you.

Very nice and realistic depiction of WW1, can't wait to see where the other girls go. :pinkiehappy: Although, I would at least like to see WW2 or Iraq action, if you don't mind. (And mabye Vietnam, while your at it. :twilightblush:) Oh, and, will the girls ever learn where they went?

2056723-That'd be pretty bad ass, but the Wild West in general is not a conflict. Maybe if I put her in the middle of the Alamo, or the charge at San Juan hill.:twilightsheepish:

Desert Storm? Vietnam? Hamburger Hill maybe? 73 and Easting?

2059824
Did I mention Vietnam? Or maybe Korea.

I think WWII would be good actually.

2059828-You and me both.

(Battle of Iwo Jima FTW!)
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2057929-Thanks!:twilightsmile:
I don't think they're going to find out where they went seeing as though they have no idea about the human race or it's history.

Have some Fluttershy to sooth your nerves. :yay:
This was an interesting battle to capture, considering the amount of dying that actually took place that day in such a concentrated area.

Like, comment, and enjoy! :twilightsmile:

DIEEEE!
BURRRRNNN!
ROT IN HELL!
Oh, what? I'm typing? Shit!
Anyway, Georgie Patton FTW! I hope one of his battles is in this. He was epic as fuck.

This isn't relevant to this story, but I nominate this thing for the offical Baltimore Ravens Brony Mascot!
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Anyway, nice chapter.I always love Fluttershy.

2063157- . . . ooooooooookaaaaaay :unsuresweetie:
2063267-Lol, the Ravens are going to win. The llama predicted it.:pinkiecrazy:

I don't like how the humans are being portrayed- but it makes sense from their perspective I guess.:unsuresweetie:

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2063332-How so? I cant get too in-depth with them. After all, none of the mane six know that they're "humans" and none of the humans want to avert their attention long enough to get killed in battle. It's sort of a, "What the hell is that thing?" kind of deal. :raritywink:
2063334-Dear god . . . GIVE IT BACK! :raritydespair:

I wonder if Little Bighorn will be one of the battles [General Custar

2063359-That's definitely an interesting idea.
BTW it's Custer. (Lol sorry, OCD:twilightsheepish:)

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