Rainbow Dash has always been a highly motivated individual-always wanting to be a better flier, and as you all know she is very loyal. But what shaped her into such a pony? What drives Rainbow Dash to go ever faster? And when Ponyville is hit by something from Rainbow Dash's past, will her fear or her loyalty win?
Rainbow Dash-centric with a side of Spitfire.
Hi everybody!~~
It's my first fanfic (really first writing attempt in general), so it's probably really bad
Comments/criticisms appreciated :D
This story's got ponteniol and I look forward to seeing more
I'll put this on track and see where it goes I think.
hmmmmmmm
i look forward to this :D
this looks promising i look forward to more
Chapter 2 is up-c&c appreciated
dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN
i wonder what happens NEXT
wright more plz!
Chapter 3 is here!
Sorry it's a little shorter then the other two-ended up cutting out what will end up being the next chapter.
And apologies if the young RD thing isn't your style, should only be 2 or 3 more chapters before the more grown-up stuff comes around.
C&C welcome!
I have one word for you, DAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
I'm really enjoying this story so far, keep up the good work.
"Happy Cloud Orphanage", really? That's like calling a ghetto a summer camp.
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That was kind of the point :d
Glad you like it though :D
Sorry for everybody that's been reading this, but I'm going to have to stop writing it for a bit
I thrashed my original outline for the story to hell, and i might end up rewriting everything past chapter 2 T_T
Not abandoning it (hopefully), just have to rethink the general story arc and a big school project just came up as well (), so it might be a while before it gets updated again
Revised chapter three is up :3
Update. NOW