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Rainbow Dash has always been a highly motivated individual-always wanting to be a better flier, and as you all know she is very loyal. But what shaped her into such a pony? What drives Rainbow Dash to go ever faster? And when Ponyville is hit by something from Rainbow Dash's past, will her fear or her loyalty win?

Rainbow Dash-centric with a side of Spitfire.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

Hi everybody!~~

It's my first fanfic (really first writing attempt in general), so it's probably really bad :derpytongue2:

Comments/criticisms appreciated :D

This story's got ponteniol and I look forward to seeing more

I'll put this on track and see where it goes I think.

hmmmmmmm
i look forward to this :D

this looks promising i look forward to more

Chapter 2 is up-c&c appreciated :rainbowkiss:

dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN
i wonder what happens NEXT

Chapter 3 is here! :scootangel:

Sorry it's a little shorter then the other two-ended up cutting out what will end up being the next chapter.

And apologies if the young RD thing isn't your style, should only be 2 or 3 more chapters before the more grown-up stuff comes around.

C&C welcome! :heart:

I have one word for you, DAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

I'm really enjoying this story so far, keep up the good work.

"Happy Cloud Orphanage", really? That's like calling a ghetto a summer camp.

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That was kind of the point :d

Glad you like it though :D

Sorry for everybody that's been reading this, but I'm going to have to stop writing it for a bit

I thrashed my original outline for the story to hell, and i might end up rewriting everything past chapter 2 T_T

Not abandoning it (hopefully), just have to rethink the general story arc and a big school project just came up as well (:twilightangry2:), so it might be a while before it gets updated again

Revised chapter three is up :3

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