The five greatest TOME (Terrain of Magical Expertise)players Alpha, Flame Girl, Kirbopher, Nylocke, and Gamecrazed got into another fight with a new hacker trying his luck to ruin there wonderful game time, but this hacker can do more things than what the average hacker can do.
What will our hero's do in a new world they dont even know, how will they get back to TOME,and-
"All answers will be revealed soon for I 'NYLOCKE, DRAGON MASTER OF PLOT DEVELOPMENT! will ensure all the answers"
yeah pretty much.
crossover with the wonderful web show "TOME: Terrain of Magical Expertise" on newgrounds.
proof read by Alekusu-Iega
Chapters (10)
Ok, not gonna lie that was good. But, issues
1. You need an editor.
2.If you cant find one (which is nearly impossible on this site.) just revise how you write your paragraphs.
You have a solid Idea, and I'd like to see more of it.
My judgement will be withheld for now. As 2130558 said, a solid idea, and I'll see where you're going first.
2130558thank you and ill try i have a proof reader and he tries to fix any mistake i make
2130587please if you have anything to say just do so i dont mind and besides i really need the help from other people you know
but thank you both for liking it at least
2130618 What you need friend is an editor, try looking for groups like that and explain the story concepts for them so they can know how to help you.
2130689ok man ill take it into consideration
NYLOCK: Dragon of Woosh!
2130829thank you so much man
2130869im trying my best nylocke impression in this story but sometimes i just cant, but i will make something up sometimes and make that violation joke around here somewhere
I read this again and I still find the premise funny.
2415098How so?
Still glad you like it.
cool! i love TOME and this is neat! :)
4243046 glad you like it
I'll try to work on it if I can figure out how to do anything on a blank space
For my view on this story please check your fimfiction PM's
4597420 Alrighty then. I shall read it
Love that series, any plans to continue?
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I would like to but...not sure at the moment.
Starting off great! This is promising!
Will this story still have that weird plot twist at the end of the tournament that I didn't like?
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What plot twist? That Zeto was Kirb?
Oooo~ New Chapter drop~ Excellent
Fuck Zeus! Besides that. This has been a excellent Chapter
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, but thank you
But that's what Zeus wants
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!!! Shit! No! Ok. Die Zeus! XD
Whoa...this chapter was nuts.. I love it
This was a nice end. Props~
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Thank you
11563672
You are welcome