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Do You Even Brush? (Fans of Colgate)146 stories ·217 members

The Infinite Adventures of Dr. Who and Colgate

A new dr. Whooves story made for all those who are actually fans of the show. This story takes place while David Tennant was still the doctor. It also has the fact that Colgate is also a timelord. They go all over the galaxy and run into some farmiliar faces along the way. This is only my second fic guys so please constructive criticism!

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Listie The Scribe Maid

Listie The Scribe Maid #1 · Jan 29th, 2013 · · ·

(Joke) Alt. Title: Colgate And Doctor Who2: Whoropa

Sirnicklaser111

Sirnicklaser111 #2 · Jan 29th, 2013 · · ·

David Tennant yes cool fic so far but seems like you are rushing it just a bit but other than that good

Smiley216

Smiley216 #3 · Jan 29th, 2013 · · ·

i'm with Sirnicklaser ... this could have used a bit more exposition or inner thought processes of Colgate trying to convince herself that this random pony was safe enough to travel with, and some of your dialogue seems a bit choppy ... but i like your plot concept and look forward to seeing where it goes next

Neogranz