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Octavia is Best Pony34 stories ·14 members

Octavia always wondered what her special talent was. Now she's found it.

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kamil

kamil #1 · Feb 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Eh? I was expecting a little more than that. I mean, she just saw a cello being played once, and instantly knew exactly how to play it, including the ability to read music? Not only that, she was already "perfect" before she rightly should have even been able to reach all the notes? I may not know exactly how cutie marks work, but from what I've seen in the show they don't GIVE you special talents they just reflect what you already have and I can guarantee that nobody (and nopony) could read cello sheet music without being told how to read cello sheet music, with the exception of magic spells designed specifically for comprehending everything in every form (or, I suppose, one specific for understanding cello sheet music).

Even in Equestria, the story is implausible and uninteresting. I didn't find any fault in your writing though.

MidnightBrightBrony

MidnightBrightBrony #2 · Feb 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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I completely understand. I wrote this story somewhere around 2 years ago or something. I can assure you that I won't write like this again anytime soon.

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