Twilight's Research into Divination magic has given Rarity a vision about her future love. Will she interpret the portents correctly?
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Ebon Mane
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I nearly fell out of my chair laughing on page four. Loving this so far.
I just had the strangest "Ah Ain't Got No Ack-cent" flashback.
This was so beautiful, I've never been keen on romantic stories, but i tell ya this one was great. Although I was hoping RD to get some loving.... poor Dashie...
"And then Rarity was an apple."
I admit. I laughed out loud.
oh Pinkie Pie
Nicely done, ok so I wasn't expecting that ending... and somehow I got into my head that once it appears that Rarity wasn't going to be with Big Mac, that he ended up with another unicorn
. Oh well, still good story, a nice break from the all the dark and angst filled ones. ~Celestia's Paladin, Ex Solis et Lunae, Providentia et Prospera
hey doen't the vison mean 2 ponys that could be with rarity : hint big mac or applejack
ha ha ha i am gust as surprised as twilight
i am surprised at the last part
so rainbow dash was into applejack but got over it and pinky pie cursing randomy makes this a good story for me
so when dash talked to rarity she said lucky then an insult is the insult the b word
You know... I read this a month or three ago, and I reread it tonight on a whim.
And I just got what Pinkie did.
Well played, sir! Well played.
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Reminded me of the terrible Doom: Repercussions of evil fanfic
And then john was a demon
FUCK A MAILBOX!
I laughed way too hard at that.
Loved it! Great job Ebon Mare.
AHMM *Deep breath*" FUCK A MAILBOX. SHIT.DAMN. ASS. "" Pinkie, ponies are staring. Don't swear, especially when you're so bad at it" Pinkie is now my favorite.
Totally called it~
This is a hell of a lot better than most of the shit on this site, by the way.
Loved it.
Also that swearing
6611 um he did the blue unicorn was an illusion it was really big Mac .
"And Rarity... Rarity learned that when it comes to love, you can't always get what you want. But if you try sometimes, you might find... you get what you need."
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THAR
....
and i liked it
Great story, btw.
Spy: "I must sap all the buildings!"
Engineer: "No Spy, you ARE the buildings."
*And then Spy was a Sentry*
3 things:
, but it was a little predictable
1. Love the confusion youre setting up
2. HER NAME IS DITZY DO, GET IT RIGHT
3. Pinkie cursing was the best moment of my life "F*** A MAILBOX"
Lolololololroflroflrofllmaolmaolmao
FUCK A MAILBOX!
Why is Big Mac under an illusion?
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lol #2
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? Child molester?
I'll be honest i almost stopped reading until this chapter because i thought it was too generic. the last sentence of ch 3 made me confused so i continued on. wow. damn, full of twists.
Amazing idea, one of my favorite concepts so far. 
only major complaint i have is that i feel pinkies character is a bit over exaggerated at some points, more so in previous chapters than this one. (pinkies candy rant for example) Great story though. I want moar. MOAR! 
Ponies cursing is the best.
Bravo good sir, Bravo
BAHAHAHAHAH Mac's rant was brilliant. Continuing to read.
Well author, you've sure got some stones there. And I don't mean a major Tom, either.
Pinkie Pie, insurance scammer.
Augh, Rolling Stones reference! D: Dammit, Ebon!
Well, anyway, story number eighty. Eighty. It sure is fun to go back and read old fics, but boy howdy is this season one. Like, middle of season one season one. I can't even judge it properly, because standards were so different back then, if not nonexistant.
Still, I'm impressed at the triple-ship handling. Pinkie on-call Tourette's was hysterical, and so was Big Mac's sudden accent switch (predating Applejack's, if I'm not mistaken!) The twist at the end of chapter 3 was perfectly executed, even if you ended with the February-esque, "Ah love you and now you love me too."
BUT WHO CARES BEST SHIP
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>> even if you ended with the February-esque, "Ah love you and now you love me too."
Well I actually did write this in February of 2011. This and Creatures of the Night are two of the original February fics.
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You bad person you :V
2547216 Okay, I've been googling my ass off and I have no idea. What the hell is a "february fic?"
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Within this fandom, it refers to a poorly written shipping fic with a weak conflict that's resolved immediately upon one of the characters telling another character about romantic feelings, which the second character immediately reciprocates. Basically, the only plot is 'pony A and pony B like each other'
2589264 Delightful... Why is it called "February?"
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Because that just happens to be the month where the archetypal cases were written, back in February 2011, since it was very early in the fandom and there were only a few fic authors, so even the very bad ones (like myself in those days) got attention. Valentine's day also increases the number of shipping fics produced, so there happen to be a lot of bad shipping fics every February.
Nice fic, very cute. Love the red herring. Don't understand why Big Mac was disguised at the end as a blue unicorn. Was that a reference to something? The swearing caught me totally by surprise, great job!
Anyway, excellent work, greenthumbed!
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Well that's amusing.
I have to say the best part about this was Pinkie Pie's insurance scam.
I am amused by the presence of early pony stuff here though.
Big Mac's accent being by choice (something we later found out was the case with Applejack)
Rainbow Dash x Applejack and Rarity x Applejack
Why doesn't this have a comedy tag? Fuck a mailbox, indeed.