• Published 23rd Jan 2012
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Sweetie Belle's Cutie Mark - Clavier



Sweetie Belle finally gets her cutie mark, but her special talent isn't what anypony expected!

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Comments ( 11 )

Mourning is a tiring experience. Pinkie slept so deeply that even her foreboding twitches and paroxysms weren’t enough to wake her.

Really?
I hate when you this happens.

Another exceptionally good chapter :yay:
looking forward to the next one :scootangel:

Derpy is well screwed up even more now. :derpyderp1::derpyderp1::derpyderp1::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpyderp2: There you go thats all i have to say.:eeyup:

Just found this story and read it all in a night. Can't wait for when it comes off of hiatus.

Can't wit for the next chapter, so far it has been a wonderful story

This story truly terrifies me in all ways imaginable. However, it is very well-written, so I hope you take it off hiatus and end it soon so the nightmares can finally stop. :pinkiecrazy:

:pinkiecrazy::moustache::pinkiecrazy:

I like some sad fics occasionally but this is some really messed up shit... I love it!


Oh Celestia, I'm a terrible pony arn't I?

Its a very good story. The only problem I have is that Twilight appears too passive. She would not be an inept investigator, at least in my opinion. Axe murders are typically very messy and leave a lot of forensic evidence and Sweetie Bell is not a master criminal. Other than that, good emotional contact with the reader, good characterization of Pinkie Pie especially.

Here is my official review for this story. :pinkiecrazy:

"Sweetie Belle's Cutie Mark" is a train wreck of bucked up craziness. It was so utterly horrifying and detailed that I absolutely could NOT stop reading this story!

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