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Rated T: Language, Violence, Blood

Even within the most gentle of souls, lies a savage beast. For Fluttershy, a young Pegasus, this could not be truer after an accidental dose of gamma radiation alters her body chemistry. Now when Fluttershy becomes angry or outraged, a startling metamorphosis occurs. The creature is driven by rage and pursued by a vindictive general. The creature has caused untold destruction in its uncontrollable wrath. Now, Fluttershy is on the run and alone. And she must remain forever alone until she can find a way to tame the raging spirit that dwells within her.

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2030975 Hey, glad you read the story. So what does no mean? Do you mind explaining? I don't really see what you're trying to tell me.

I'm enjoying this, do go on... :pinkiehappy:

I shall follow this cautiously. Hulk is my favorite comic character. DON'T fuck this up.

2031236 I will strive not too. Also, any advise or things you have seen other writers did to the Hulk that you didn't like, please let me know so I can avoid them.

2031192 Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. And I hope I continue to entertain you.

I trust that you can do this well. Good luck. :ajsmug:

2032103

Describe her rage. and don't be skimpy with the violence. Hulk can tear through fleshy bodies like they're not there, can and does. Hulk does NOT care about anyone other then Betty and the two or three people who are Hulk's friends. And don't forget Hulk's limitless strength. Madder = Stronger, PERIOD.
Hulk also has a healing factor rivaling Wolverine, just not as fast. and Hulk's skin is incredibly tough.

I would think spike would be the Hulk

2045273 I mean I do see where you are coming from. Spike a kind gentle dragon with a heart of gold must deal with the fact if he becomes to taken by greed he becomes a giant firebreathing 20 foot tall unstoppable force. Much like is done for the character in the show. The story would be primarily about how he overcomes greed and learns that there are more precious things then wealth.

Man I just LOVE the Hulk and his mythos. Are you basing this tale more on the old tv show?

Will the rest of the Mane 6 guest star as other Marvel heroes ?:unsuresweetie:

I can see either Spike and/or Fluttershy being the Hulk and this seems like the start of a fun ride. So please do keep up the good work upon such a great idea.:yay:

2046676 Thank you for the comment. It's a combination of both the movie and Bixby tv series. It's also taken from other Hulk media, like video games, tv series, and comic books.

As for the other cast of the main 6, I'm not sure if I will post them into future projects as other Marvel heroes yet. It depends on the success of Flutterhulk. But I'm sure we'll see them in the future :pinkiehappy:

Any way thank you so much for the comment. Have a great day.

And I see it's on FIMFiction already. NEATO!

2052310 Yeah, I'm glad it's here. :D It gets a wider audience an wider opinions. :)

2046676 lets see....
Dr. Strange ==> Twilight
Luke Cage ==> Applejack
Emma Frost ==> Rarity
north star ==> rainbowdash
deadpool ==> Pinkie pie

but those are just my guesses :twilightsmile:

2061284 Hm... Good set of heroes. All of them fit their character for the most part. :D

Okay, nitpick/review/fangirl time:


Nitpick: I, personally think you might be sticking a little TOO close to the movie. But I can understand why you'd do that, since the 2008 Hulk is a nice, solid film. But I do suggest deviating from the movie more in the future. Don't have to do anything insane like I did with Iron Mare and trash everything, but a story that's a mix of both your ideas and the movie might be the right thing, but that's just me.

Also, wild guess as to Hot Rod's identity. Either Wild Fire (Sibsey's OC) or Spitfire. But I'm random like that, and I'm probably wrong.

Papul reminds me of Dr. King Schultz from Django Unchained. And that's so awesome cause he was the nicest German you'll ever meet. And a badass.

I really hope that Blackberry finds out the truth. She seems like a nice pony who means well.

2076194 Thanks for the review. I've got some ideas that will 'hopefully' give me a little distance from the movie, but not sure what chapter they will be implimented.

Hot Rod Wheels Idenity: Don't worry, you'll find out who he is. He's an oc of my own and hopefully it will work.

I loved writing Monsiuer Pabul and Blackberry. I thought they were just fun characters to write about and I can't wait to write about other characters in the story.

Truly a great tale, but if you want to make it your own....use the mythos of the Hulk real well.

Try using the Windgo as an upcoming foe for the story.:yay:

Still, great update do keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

Dammit! I was expecting some good Smashing fun in this chapter!

2076385 Thank you. Hopefully, we'll see a Hulk-villain who doesn't make an appearance in much media. I hope what I have plan will differentiate enough that it still can be unique in its own right. But only time will tell.

2078222 Don't worry, that's coming sooner than you think.

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Ryan Gosling approves of this chapter.


In other news, wow we both seem to be in kinda the same boat....we'd better start changing BOTH our stories so we don't get confused.

If you want, I can proofread for ya.

2113405 I'm glad you approve, but don't think that's the last we've seen of the hulk. There's plenty more to come. :raritywink:

2113911 Perhaps that would be wise. I can send you the next chapter once I have completed it.

2114100 Awesome!

Weird thing, I'm also working on the next chapter of Flutterhulk.

Ah snap , this will not end well for any pony.:fluttershysad:

I wonder how old jolly green will escape this time ?

Plus the usage of the S.H.I.E.L.D of this world could lead into the Avengers.

So please do keep up the good work on such a great story.

2114326 Thank you. I hope to continue to write well. And perhaps someday build an Avengers group of my own. It may not contain those all of those from the movie, but it would contain many of Marvel's familar faces.

So, Fluttershy is going to finally meet her mysterious friend face to face...and this friend did something to her in the past?

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2168057 This friend, yes. Cookie plays an important role in Fluttershy's past and her future. And don't worry, I haven't forgot our friend Hot Rod. That character will play his role as well.

yes! waiting to see where this goes. So far it's awesome.
:twilightsmile:

So we finally meet the "Rick Jones" of the story...nice.:pinkiehappy:

Great update as it seems that all of Thunderbolt's secrets and tricks may cost him his job someday...:fluttershysad:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.:yay:

2169274 Yes, indeed. Our young friend Rick Jones has indeed made his cameo.

As for Thunderbolt, if you think he has dug himself a deep grave, wait until you see what I have planed.

2168838 Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I hope I continue to entertain in the near future.

I'd love to see you come outwith some misdirection, like Guam becoms Zzzax instead of Abomination. YOU GOTTA DEVIATE from the movie more!

2171356 I'm hoping to encorperate a couple of things into the story that will deviate from the original movie. They should be present in a chapter or two.

Great chapter although this

Pabul silently sat back in his bed with his claws in his head

confused me a bit do you mean 'his head in his claws'? Because for a moment I thought he was stabbing himself in the head.

2175159 Yes I did. Thank you for catching that.

2178233 Fixed. Let me know if there's anything else I missed. :raritywink:

Brixy Bixby

Please excuse while I wipe the coke off my monitor.

But seriously, nice reference.:raritywink: I'd probably end up using that as a voice being called for over an intercom.

2199244 Totally cool with me. I had been watching a lot of the old show with him and Lou. Great show and great music.

2199266 From the little I've seen (and I must remedy that as soon as I can) it was damn good.

And that theme music is the best.

Nice update and great reference to the old Hulk TV show. :pinkiesmile:

I cannot wait to read what happens next now that Gaum knows the truth about Fluttershy's life.

2199811 I figured fans would enjoy that. I know I would.

U R SO EVIL/AWESOME FOR MAKING THAT PART OF A STORY!:flutterrage::rainbowkiss:

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