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Remake of one of my works I have previously done.
When the world ends, Hank and his friends are teleported to Equestria. I do not own King of the Hill nor Friendship Is Magic.
A remake on my first MLP story!
If it's good - THANK YOU!
If it's bad - At least there's a King of the Hill Story!
Original Story:
Dang O' Ponies
(Warning: This was my first MLP crossover story ever. Expect typos, mistakes, unoriginality, etc.)
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BWAAAAAAHHHH!
I would phrase some things differently, but overall this was very entertaining to read. Good job.
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You sir or madam earn a fave and a watch for this!
Now it look likes some of the engy's old friends are going to equestria?
This oughta be good. *sarcasm: off*
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Thanks
(BTW, its sir)
A King of the Hill crossover?
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Okay, I'm following this for the originality of it. Overall, I'd say you need to work on making sure everything is grammatically correct. For example, make sure to always capitalize the word "I." I saw a lot of instances of that word not being capitalized, especially for some reason whenever Cotton would talk.
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I can't help but think that Cotton wouldn't speak PERFECT English, so that's why I don't capitalize the I when he talks. But now that you mentioned it, Boomhauer talks IMPERFECT English, and yet I capitalize the I when he talks...
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There is a difference between purposeful poor grammar for speech and just plain bad grammar. When breaking grammar rules for speech, what is said has to actually sound different than what would be correct. However, a lower case i sounds the same as an uppercase one. Therefore, using lower case i's to show poor grammar in speech is pointless. If you were actually talking to them, would you be able to hear whether or not the i was capitalized?
That's what you have to ask yourself when writing dialogue of any kind, really. What would this line sound like if the character were actually in front of me speaking it?
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OK OK I'll try to fix the grammar next time...
I realize that Dale smokes a lot, but that seemed a little overdramatic.
Wait...
That's right, it's Dale I'm talking about. That actually seems appropriate.
I just finished reading the chapters, all I can say is this..
i'm expecting cotton's cutie mark to be a rifle and a military helmet.
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Ironically, his Cutie Mark was a green army helmet from WWII in my original story.
However, I've decided to still make him a blank flank.
Heck, in my original story, all the guys already had their Cutie Marks.
Hank - Propane Tank
Dale - Fly Swatter
Kahn - Mai Tai
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Really? How?
(Sorry for the late reply)
So, you essentially ripped off that entire episode, and disregarded the fact that they should have already lived that experience as humans?
If I wanted that story, I'd to watch the episode. The only real difference between this one and the original was that the characters were ponies. I mean, it was a good episode, but come on. Original content is more important.
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LOL
I promised myself I wouldn't do something like this ever again.
The second reason was that my story should be a bit more original (a reviewer once commented on this).
But my first (and important) reason is that making a chapter based on an episode took longer than I expected.
Well it turns out that one of my loyal fans actually posted me a link that shows Hank and his friends as ponies
Link to the KOTH characters as ponies!
Aaah male bonding
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
double nostalgia
Oh please tell me Bobby is there too. So much lolz to be had there.
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Sorry for the late reply
Sadly Bobby won't make an appearance here, since, in my original story, he doesn't appear. The good news is that a loyal fan and friend made a sequel to my story, called A second Chance, and it does have Bobby in it! You should give it a read!
A second Chance
First!
And so far so good
GREAT CHAPTER LOL
So far its all good... eyup... all good.
I didn't want to be the one the to say this but... WHAT IN THE HAY!?
I don't think the date that the world ended should be 'September 14, 2009' because 'My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic' came out a year later. So for Bill to be a brony, he would have to be able to see in the future.
I think you should change it to at least... maybe somewhere in the beginning of 2013 because you seem to have mention Babs in the this chapter and thats in season 3.
But thats up to you
.... I mean... if you want.
I know this may sound stupid but this was good
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I appreciate your compliment.
2830845 thanks since there wasn't that many King of the hill crossovers this had the characters accurate and the side stories funny, The only thing I wanted to see was Bills revenge
Will this be available on Fimfiction?
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I will have to ask the author about that...
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sorry about that...I would want to do it but I had to figure out how to do it.....and deal with Diamond Tiara/Silver Spoon fans...
2832141but maybe I'll create a side story about Bill's revenge!
in the last chapter it doesn't say anything about it so maybe it is possible for Bill to get his revenge!!!!
Well, this has to be one of the more unique ideas anyway.
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Thanks for the compliment
Cottttttttttttttonnnnnnnnnnnnnn.
"Rainbow Dale" that is the of this ship.
This is dang o' crazy, I tell you what.
Bill gon' go craaazy
Cotton has come to end Hank's new life.
Bill is from the future. Lol'd at "Redneck hillbillies"
Hank and his narrow urethra.
*Hangin' out in the library* Mmm hmm, yup...yup...yup. Twilight: Uhm, what are you guys doing?
Then the rest of Arlen shows up.
Yup
Got dangit Dale, they're just cigarettes.