In this story, we accompany our favorite marshmallow pony, Sweetie Belle on her adventure. Follow her in her tale; as we delve into this story of friendship and magic.
In this story, we accompany our favorite marshmallow pony, Sweetie Belle on her adventure. Follow her in her tale; as we delve into this story of friendship and magic.
2026971 Better?
2026991 There is still the first part of what I just said, but okay. After that, you'll be fine. This will be my last hour for tonight, so I wish you luck!
2027018I did cap it bro.
looks interesting, I'll keep an eye on this story and see where it goes
2027949 Thanks mate. To all reading, this is the first chapter of what I'm thinking will be 3 or 4. So stay tuned.
Well, Ill take that this is leading to something interesting, and everything seems to be in context, also, the narrative is similar to an actual episode, but the thing is, that it could use a little bit more detail with the expressions and emotions, we know how all the characters are like, but it feels a bit more like a script rather than being something that a fan wrote, but like I said, this is leading to something interesting so its a little earlier to say if its good or not.
and yeah, I kinda like this
2037992 I'll look into trying to find a way to make them emote more. Appreciate the help mate.