(This will be written in First Person) One day in the Canterlot Guard barracks, Shining Armor reveals that they will be sending two guards from the trainees and send them to Ponyville for a little bit of RNR, although Archie thinking this is bogus, he decides he will only go if he is selected, he and his friend Mist Wind, who is a trainee of the Wonderbolts and Canterlot Guards thinks it would be a great way for Archie to make some friends. Archie never liked being around large groups of people he's only working on strategies and statistics for the Canterlot Guards. Is it possible that Archie and Mist could be chosen.
Legitimately surprised this isn't a clop.
2022057 I can see where you got it, I didnt expect that but clops arent my thing so XD no clops here
The first three chapters were great...four and five felt incredibly rushed, as did the conflict with Sombra. Felt like it was just a way to rush the story to completion. First three chapters were good, last two...not so much in my opinion. They really killed it for me; as such, thumbs down. Sorry. =\