By - NLR Lightning Bolt
Edited by - Ferrosxlupus
Rowan's life was normal, he had no wife, no kids, and he enjoyed living alone until an alicorn filly showed up on his doorstep and completely turned his life around. Now he's forced to try to help an alicorn get home while another will do everything in his power to stop him.
Page generated in 0.116 seconds
Total duration
638 users online
939,301 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
This is my first story so feel free to criticize
some grammar and spelling errors, but i think I'll keep reading just to see where this goes
-A few grammatical errors here and there
-Not enough punctuation.
These are the only bad things that I saw, but here are the good things that I saw:
-Good story line
-Good Characterization
Although, what really caught my eye was the name of your story:
What's funny is that I'm writing a four part series and the main character's name is Rowan. He's a unicorn who was actually a Brony that was sent to Equestria. And he also has a rare form of magic called Shadow magic. The story has a lot to do with the past and nature of the changelings. If you're interested, I leave a link here.
Yeah, what 2021291 said. I can't really add much else to that.
2021291 thanks and I know it had some errors it's sorta hard to edit a story from your phone and the only reason I named him Rowan was because of a friend I have that's name is Rowan and I hope to have at least chapter 1 done by the end of the weekend.
You should add the word "Rain" in the description so it doesn't lead the mind to wander with "dripping wet alicorn filly."
I know I may be gross for pointing it out, but, hey, it's not the first time it's happened.
Thanks for that TehAlphaGamer. I wouldn't of thought of that!! Now that you pointed that out I'll watch for things like that
after I find an editor. 
The name "Rowan" seems interesting, but I was confused at first because when I originally read the title I thought of this gentleman:
pokemon.neoseeker.com/w/i/pokemon/0/02/Professor_Rowan.jpg
this.....is.....fucking......AWESOMESAUSE!!!!!
For a moment, I thought this was Professor Rowan.
I have an editor so expect to see slight changes in the chapters I have posted so far.
its a good start hope you don't mind a critic not that I'm a very harsh one.
thump poor brian