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Just here to read, and write, some FanFic. I really enjoy this stuff, so if you ever need an editor I can look it over for you, just hit me up!

Comments ( 33 )

Welp. More feels. Just what I needed. Guess I shouldn't be surprised though, given who wrote this.

OMG! I have tears in my eyes. Beautiful story. :fluttercry:

This is going to hit right in the heart isn't it. :fluttershysad:

y u do dis?

2019704 Because I feel sad, so I write sad.

2019713
Why feel sad? :fluttershysad:

Short, sweet and sad. The Three S's. Very good story.

........NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:
she's dead!!!!!!!!!!!! :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

2019652
Oh god my childhood! The feels have been doubled! :fluttercry::fluttershbad:

Jegus mah feels are through the roof right now

I was actually tearing up a bit just singing the song before I read the fic.

Hush now, quiet now
It's time to lay your sleepy head
Hush now, quiet now
Prepare for the path ahead
Drift, drift up above
The angels are beside you then
Drift, drift up above
One day we'll meet again...:fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair::applecry::ajsleepy:

Ow, I do believe I heard something in my chest break/:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Well dang it.... That's depressing. :fluttercry: :raritycry: :applecry:

The ending was a bit...I don't know....sudden, fast. Most of the story was good, but it needs a little bit more.

Thank you so much for making and sharing this fanfic about my drawing.
I'm always impressed of how people can write such short stories so very convincingly real that the reader can feel the emotions that can be felt in themselves like it's been described in a story.
I also want to say that I like the idea of that she choose "Berry" as Spring's second name after her father's favorite food. I'm not sure if I'm going to use that in the comic, but if I do, I'll give you credit for it as well!
You did a very good job on this fanfic! Keep up the awesome work!

,Dante William / DanteIncognito

:twilightsmile:

You shot me in the heart WHATTA HELL :raritycry:

2039721 Thank you, thank you very much Dante. :twilightsmile:

2019332 Alas, it is me with... another sad story. So much for a different type, eh?

2023314
*sniff* Goodbye Mommy... Have sweet dreams. *sob* :fluttercry:

One of the best and saddest fics I have ever read :fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair::unsuresweetie::applecry:

I cried after reading this... one small item though; "hand" sorry to be that guy

“Do you remember that song I taught you as a young foal?” Fluttershy asked, hoping that she would. Spring Berry nodded her head softly, focused on her mother. Fluttershy closed her eyes slowly before speaking. “Sing it for me please... If that's OK with you.”
Tears welled up in Spring Berry's eyes, as she knew what was just around the corner. “Su-Sure thing, momma...”

“Hush now, quiet now
It's time to lay your sleepy head
Hush now, quiet now
Prepare for the path ahead
Drift, drift up above
The angels are beside you then
Drift, drift up above
One day we'll meet again...”
The room suddenly became filled with an eerie red glow, as the screen that once shown with scribbled lines now held a flat line, accompanied by a continuous beep. Tears began to flow down Spring Berry's cheeks as she rested her head on her mother's hand.
“Goodbye, mommy... Sweet dreams...” she cried, as doctors poured into the room.

this moment, i started to cry and i created a pool of tears. ;(

Oh my god!!! I cried!!

I can’t stop crying!!! :fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritycry::

Saddest story I've ever read, but one of the most beautifully written, Rest In Peace Fluttershy

That was sad and just one little mistake isn't it supposed to be hoove instead of hand

8414082
Yes, it is. Thanks for the correction, and thank you for reading!

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