I'm back 4 years later to apologize to everyone who read my stories this is really fucking cringeworthy lmao
Sequel to "Two Best Friends Play..."
Rainbow Dash and Vinyl Scratch somehow get sent to an alternate universe, where they are princesses instead of Celestia and Luna. Tyranny. Tyranny happens.
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Rainbow Dash
Vinyl Scratch
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I love it its so awesome
This could be interesting.
Ooh yay! EPIC PORTAL TIME!
Hmm... interesting.
Wow Two new Alicorn Rainbow Dash stories in one day
Need to add to this Alicorn Rainbow
awesome story keep up the awesome stories
2020374 Done
It's pretty good, has a lot of potential. I like the idea of using the cutie marks as a paragraph break. However, I would consider finding smaller pictures of them. Other than that, I don't have any complaints. Good job.
2020830 Thanks for the feedback
The problem is, I couldn't find smaller pictures that were still transparent.
fucking awesome.more
can you clap with hooves?
First of all I was very existed when I saw not one, but two alicorn Rainbow stories added at the same time. However the first one was simply terrible and truly amateurish, this one is, compared to the other one, better.
It is not unreaderble. and only shares one of the other stories problem, the pasing is way to fast. I recommend rewriting the chapter till it becomes about four times as fast, do that and I think this story actually could become promising.
Anyone notice there is always that one douche that puts a thumbs down
Other than that this is good
2021818 I'm really starting to like your comments
2021618 You know what they say. In Equestria... BUCK LOGIC!
2022130 *Claps my hooves together* Logic and all it's stupid.. logicy-ness...
"I taught you well" this statement is correct.
Funniness! This story seems somewhat random at points, as well. I love it!
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Can my of be in the next chapter I don't care if he has huh die
If you don't want to that's ok
Oh no the princesses have gone crazy -- invoke clause 7.
Nothing was as perfect as that.
Well that is one way to cement your rule. Fear will keep the systems in line.
2054427 Exactly.
Nothing like humor to brighten up my day
btw I was thinking nothing this is to blood to change
Hey Friendship is Witchcraft reference at the end
"so unrainbow"
2057584 Finally somepony got that
I think I've got most of the references so far
Dis is good song
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Well, this is going to be awkward. Also, Dash's apprentice is Scootaloo right?
I noticed a reference to the song Lullaby for a princess in there. Also, now that Discord's out, things are going to get interesting.
2076822 Interesting is an understatement
Yes, you should make chapters longer, especially now that there seems to be something going on. I don't know what it is yet, but it sounds cool. Discord, alicorns, confusion, unexplainable magic... hang on, is this story's plot Pinkie Pie?
ReFerences, references everywhere
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Everypony hates spike- everybody hates Chris
This is hilarious. I love it!
Longer chapters= More chaos= a more
story
Wow I love it I need MAOR
2084316 Yea, yea, i'll probably get the next chapter out tonight. Depends on how I feel after ice skating practice.
Ok
BASS CANNON!!!!
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2087076 Hey, i'm the only one who can swear here
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MAAAKE IT STOOPP!!!
2087076 you are very kind
Well Fuck I love it
Well, that was...
DISCORD!!!
That's... different. I really do wish you would write longer chapters. I'm sure it would be worth it to wait a little while longer so we could read more of this stuff.
... this auda be interesting. also, that universe is pretty fucked up. seriously. CELESTIA GOT SOMETHING DONE!
Shit is about to go down... and it's gonna be hilarious!
I love it
