This story is a sequel to Do Something About Saturday!
Fluttershy loves Big Mac, but Big Mac doesn't know that.
Big Mac loves Twilight, but Twilight doesn't know that.
Twilight and Time Turner have been dating for a year and Twilight wants to take the next step in their relationship.
Rarity wants Fluttershy to find love.
Rainbow Dash is developing feelings of jealousy.
Applejack is caught in the middle and trying to hold on to her sanity.
and Pinkie Pie...is well...Pinkie Pie.
Takes place one year after "Do Something About Saturday!", but it is not required to read.
Rated teen for some sexual references (but no Clop).
Chapters (11)
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I'm sorry...
I guess this story has gotten to a bad start, I'm hoping to continue it so it could get better though.
Apprently it wasn't as good of an idea as I thought it was.
EEYUP.
my fave is yours.
Would you be interested in working with an editor? If so, we might be able to help you out.
You need a lot of help with your grammar and dialogue. Note: Don't add too many plot threads, you have too many already. Don't make this a Highlander II
2018081 <--- This. Good story idea, though, you're just moving way too fast, in addition to your grammar errors.
Just finish it. Don't worry too much about rating. Trust me I would know.
Quite the improvement, but can you improve how you spell Applejack's accent
"Unfortunately, that ship has long sailed away and will probably never come back..."
I sea what you did there.
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Indeed it did!
But there is still more chapters coming! So get ready!
Hurry UP!!!
Me Want story
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this story
You fave and follow is mine
Rooting for TwiMac even though Twilight is in a relationship with Time Turner,
Cuz they're so darn adorable together <3
Prediction/ What I hope will happen:
Twi tells her friends about 'the slightly unfortunate event',
Fluttershy is surprised that a stallion would react that way,
Fluttershy has confusing feelings about Time Turner and Mac
Twi finds out that Mac likes her
A whole bunch of confusing romantic stuff happens
Fluttershy ends up with the stallion of her(and her moms) dreams(Time Turner). And Twi develops feelings for Mac.
Well, only time will tell.
Eagerly awaiting the next installment :)
Your writing has improved so much since the first chapter, not to mention a awesome storyline.
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Those are great ideas!
Unfortunatly, I've already planned the entire thing out, so I already know who is going to end up with who.
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Thanks!
How dare you leave a cliffhanger
I demand moar! And soon!!
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"black coated, blue maned pegasus stallion"
0_0 My OC was raped by Fluttershy?!
O mein Gott
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Sorry
MOAR DEAR CELESTIA AND LUNA MOAR
Heheh...if you wouldn't mind that is
Great chapter! And great story!
We now await the comedy...
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There is already a prequel to this story, it's called "Do Something About Saturday!", check it out!
Poor.Poor ,Joy Stick.
What's with these dislikes?
Seriously.
Comments are welcome? Well then: Yes yes and more yes
Oh this chapter is just
This goes against how Fluttershy actually got her cutie mark, you know.
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She earned her cutie mark LONG after the setting of the chapter!
EPIC ending!
I loved the bonus scenes. They were funny. Best of luck with the Sequel. Great Story.
Gotta hate those wings sometimes.
Especially you RD.
"Not legally allowed to talk about it"? Isn't that censorship?
"the time on the grandfather clock in the living room"
So they are still called grandfather clocks in Equestria, not grandmother clocks, because mares seem to control society.
Great story and development.
Am I the only one reading Time Turner's speech in Matt Smith's voice?
Can't help but get a kick out of the whole not being legal allowed to talk about the past in Cloudsdale! Bravo!
i also did it with matt smith the best doctor eeeeeeeeeevvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrr
So dark
Spongebob lol