After the failed changeling attack on Canterlot. A lone changeling lands near Ponyville, broken, starving and near death. It all looks bleak for the changeling. Thats until a unexpected help comes along....
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Need longer chapters :P
2057218 Thanks for the advise. I was planning to make up for the shortness of them by making a lot of chapters. I'll try making them longer!
It is of my opinion that using a chapter break after 400 words to signify the character blacking out, while novel, is ridiculous and could have a similar effect simulated with a simple o.0.o.0.o.0.o centered on the page between scenes
2078226 Which bits did I do that in? I'll go back and edit the ones I did.
One word: Proofreading. I guarantee you just wrote this out, and posted it without even a cursory glance. There are so many errors, I've decided to punish you by making you look for them yourself instead of telling you.
2079417 Ok..... I'll go do that this weekend.Thanks for telling me though
2127171 Will do eventually. Im more interested in getting the whole story done first then go over and edit it. Thanks!
hooves not hands!!! im sorry but that just sort of ruined it for me
but other then that great story! btw derpyxdoctor is my otp
2264630 Sorry about that I guess... My first story so I wasn't sure which one I would do,
so the doctor finally makes an appearance? XD
Are you going to continue this story at some point?