When Dusk Shine brings his friends together one day to try to solve the biggest problem to all pony kind, boredom, a sudden interruption brings these plans to a halt. They end up having to survive in the universe of their female counterparts (male for Spines) and their close encounters with them. Can they manage to find a way back home, without blowing their cover and causing who knows what?
Inspired by:
On a Cross and Arrow by Conner Cogwork (Names, Basically creating the r63 mlp genre)
The 63rd Rune by Alexstrazsa (First r63 mlp story I read)
Hope You Enjoy!
Addition Cover Edits By NovelIdea
Chapters (16)
Damn nigga that's some pretty sexy bevel and embossed/ non anti-aliased cover art ya got there.
i am interested to see where this story goes
great job
Nice first chapter.
This seems incredibly familiar.
Just saying; it's not a complaint or anything.
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I think due to the success of "On a Cross and Arrow" anything that contains the rule 63/gender bender versions of the mane 6 will be compared to it.
Just saying; it's not a complaint or anything.
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Haha, ya, I'm not much of an artist... But hey, if you can make/think of a better cover picture, I will gladly look at it.
2009565 Well just the jagged edges are a bit of a problem but that shouldn't be too hard for ya to fix.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Clod Encounters Of The Sixty-Absurd Kind
...Just to let you know, I already called dibs on the crossover between the main, human, R63 and Japanese universes. I call it unIVerse.
Spike: Someone with manners? Better murder him, just in case.
Really Spike? I know you're laughably incompetent, but you can't think of any better plan than that?
Moar!!!!
For some odd reason, I have read a story that had the reverse event occurring.
Twilight and the gang were the ones in the gender-swapped dimension.
It is great to see the other way around is more... in the open.
Now if only I can find more of these gender-swapped dimension stories.
Aw shit!! Run Butterscotch!!! Run!!! Lol this fic is really good, I'll be waiting for update.
Well, seems they need to meet up after realizing the situation.
You should post more frequently. I enjoy reading this.
Hm, so the whole afternoon and he's still with AJ?
Won;t the problem be arising about now?
Sweet Apple.... Arcs? I think you need to get your spellcheck checked...
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Oops. Thanks for catching that! Fixed.
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Well, he hasn't been with her for the "whole" afternoon. Bubble took his time getting to Sweet Apple Acres, but that would probably be...say fifteen minutes. He didn't talk to Mrs. Cake very long, say that's another five minutes, and he didn't talk to Applejack too long before those colts showed up, make that another five minutes. They got chased for five more minutes and then walked back for more than double that time, let's go with fifteen minutes to get back. Adding it up would be...
5+15+5+15= 40 minutes. He could still manage to get back in time to meet up with the rest of the guys, but it would be pretty hard to get anywhere with AJ near by taking care of him and his leg injury.
*shrugs* I guess only time will tell.
Short, but still, UPDATE!!!!
Please move to the next major plot line!
Spike could have a problem with Spines if they did meet. In Equestria, dragons are highly territorial.
And thus began their journey into a land where getting laid percentages increased by approximately 327.42%
And Applejack was never heard from ever again...
Spines’ eyes scanned the interior of the tree for any sight of Dusk’s double ganger.
--> Doppelganger
Like the story
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Thanks! Fixed.
Have you thought of putting the character's thoughts as Italicized?
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Would it help greatly in reading it? Cause if it does, I'll go back through and do that to all the thoughts.
2250991 Well, it does help differentiate between thoughts and actual dialogue, so yes it would help.
O.o
What!? A Repeat of their first plan, that is a stupid move!!!
2285802 Hey, Rainbow Blitz made it, and the others were too in shock to think clearly.
But hey, what could possibly go wrong?
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Exactly
Butterscotch should save Applejack (r63)
yay! a new chapter!
*10 min. later*
NOOOO! now I need to wait for like a month!
There was nothing more? Not that much content and the it lacks more chase scene!!!
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Haha, well I'm pretty sure that the next chapter won't take as long as it took the last one. If it takes longer than a week, I'll go ahead and add little extra touches to the previous chapters and add author's notes next week instead. The longest it should take is two weeks.
If you were wondering why it took me so long to write it, I was working on a video for a friend.
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Sorry for not living up to the hype that I made by waiting so long. I'm a tad confused though about what you meant by "not that much content".
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It was basically Twilight thinking there's a new medical disease and Blitz running off with Berry.
And not enough chase scene.
... The split up was bad once and now the split up with added bumping and meeting your other worldly self, I'm finding this story frustratingly denying us the inevitable clash and near dimensional breakage.
This is very creative. Keep it coming
Well then. That ended on a happy note.
And the reveal begins...zengardner.com/wp-content/uploads/So-it-begins-the-great-shitstorm-of-our-time2.jpg Keep up the good work!
So many back to the future references, well not really reffrences but the two strange colts are doc and Marty, right?
2071377 Hello again....REMEMBER ME AND MY LITTLE FRIEND?! *Pulls out Nifleheim, the Giant Arrowheaded Claymore, named after one of the Norse Realms of Death*
Nifleheim: WAAH! Don't go pulling me into random universes! ITS NOT FUNNY, AND IT MAKES ME NAUSEOUS!
Me: Sorry... Wanted to make a little joke. I've read some of Burnasius's comments before on other stories, and I wanted to make a good impression.
...I think I aught to mention this...but He isn't Sweepy Bell.... ... ... I do believe he has been established as Silver Bell. On another note Sweepy...is just a creepy name, and it is cruel as well.
Ok...I forgot to post this for the last chapter, but does Applejack live near a Stargate, because if not, Then the farm is called Sweet Apple Acres, not Sweet Apple Arcs. Second, I KNOW WHO'S CHASING THEM, AND THEY'RE BACK FROM THE FUTURE!
2733602 also noticed an accidental jimmy neutron reference.
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As Chuckfinley once said, "Sweetie Belle is usually renamed Sweepy Bell or Silver Bell, both of which are stupid."
However, I do seem to get a lot of OC when I Google Silver Bell...However, it is a song, which would go along with the singingness of Sweetie Belle.
And then you have some people who say it should be "Squeaky Bell", which just reminds me of a chew toy...
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...may..be...I guess you'll just have to wait and see...
2733769 then wait I will!
I love this story! It is definitely one of my all time favorites, But one thing bugs me, at the beginning of the story you called male pinkie pie bubble berry, but now you call him berry bubble. Can you start calling him bubble berry again, please :)
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...really? Let me go check.
*checks*
Holy cow, you're right! Thanks for catching that. Fixed.
Berry Bubble's back to Bubble Berry, bubbleberry.
can't wait for the next one!
2752354 Me neither...
Why did you have to end it HERE?!