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A year after his defeat by the Mane Six, Discord finds himself able to use a bit of chaos energy. However, he isn't able to free himself, so he decides to get revenge on the ponies who trapped him. This is the story of how the girls deal with Discord's revenge scheme, which also means adjusting to something none of them ever expected having to deal with: truly single motherhood.

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Continue, I am curious where this is going.....

So Discord is really The Stork? :derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:




:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: this is awesome

HAHA this story is great.


i can't wait to see their reactions when they find out the father is discord :rainbowlaugh:

What... the...? Just... what...?

This is actually pretty good, the guy above obviously didn't read the previous chapters.

"I say, twas a fine chapter that was"
*Smashes keyboard*

Well... this is... to be honest im not sure what to think here. Tracking out of curiosity.

I'm finding that the long term of this story is either going to show the chaos of having a child, or the children will have chaos powers as they grow older or something of the like, in any case though I await more to be written before I make any real assumptions.
I'm tracking this now :P

this is an interesting read *tracks*

i can picture twi's face at the announcement of the foals... :twilightoops:

"but instantly shut their mothers"
umm, i think you might have missed a spelling error there. :derpytongue2:
other than that, i like how the story is going. :pinkiehappy:

"No harm will come to your foals. I can assure you all that there is no safer place in Canterlot than our castle".
Yeah... That made me laugh. Everypony knows what happens when someone in any story says that some location is perfectly safe...

Helm's Deep
Ministry of Magic

Needless to say, I think somepony will be missed...

159242 oh you polite troll you are the first polite one ive seen


He's (sorry if I called you a boy if you're actually a girl. :derpyderp1: ) trolling? Hey, if it means this chapter gets a comment, that's fine with me, especially since he's not being a jerk about it.

Ahhh, gonna be a wonderful Nature vs nurture thing innit?

So much D'AWWWWWWWWW in this chapter, also loved little Firestorm's "You Mad?" look to Pinkie:rainbowlaugh:


......not enough chaos....but good anyway :pinkiehappy:


Firestorm has already perfected his troll-face, as has little Meadow Lark.

welp, this story seems to be very promising. I look forward to more additions.:heart:

I like where this is going so far, I just hope the chaos isn't too bad because the cuteness you get from this chapter is amazing XD

all of this cuteness
somethings gonna happen next chapter

pinkie. stop being a "do as i say not as i do" parent.

Its still falls under the lines of adorable, although I have to admit I'm not sure where the babies are headed at this point, I would hope that its not so sinister, as I've read quite enough dark/grimdark for my lifetime.

Also, FIRST!!!

Oh boy. Things are going to get interesting, aren't they?

This chapter reminded me so much of The Incredible's "Jack-Jack Attack" short.

Personally, I didn't like the idea of having them inherit their father's looks (fangs, red & yellow eyes). I would have focused on the abilities they inherited from their father, such as them breaking the laws of physics and exploding. It's just me, though...


umm... lol?

Fun chapter. Suspense and parenthood, very fun chapter :pinkiehappy:.


That's your opinion and I'm not going to refute you for it. As for why the foals look the way they do, I don't plan out the appearances of my characters, I just get an image in my head and that's what they look like. So I didn't really have a concious choice in the matter.

And, if it makes you feel any better, the story really won't focus much on their looks, and will focus more on their personalities and abilities.

("Butterscotch…please stop defying the laws of physics…." Pinkie requested.) Pinkie your not one to talk.

I love this story plz make more or ill go insane!!!!

Please continue ignoring that guy.
I love the way they are developing physical traits as well as magical, can't wait to see which direction this story takes.

One thing that occurred to me while reading this chapter was that I remembered hearing that supposedly human beings are the only species that actually feels pain while giving birth.


Well, considering the ponies on this show don't exactly act like normal horses in every aspect, I think I deserve a little leeway here.


I know; I just felt like bringing it up is all.


Thank you for the education, then. :raritywink:

but in all honesty my dad is awesome

Kinda feels like it's a bit all over the place. In some places they seem absolutely evil, in others they just seem playful. As for blueblood, well, he kind of deserved it. I have a really hard time ever feeling bad for him.

258054 Look at most toddlers. They seem either evil or playful depending on who you ask. As for the foals here....well, Libby just didn't like Prince Blueblood, so she wanted to mess with him, Meadow Lark was hungry so she was just getting an easy meal (nature taking its course, basically), and with Firestorm's leg getting broken, it was just rough-housing that went too far, something that happens a lot with kids.

258065I see your point, and will look forward to more.

You ever read the book "Good Omens"? Cause this kinda reminds me of that, in a good way. Satanic powers filtered through childish innocence. Fun times.

258113 No, I haven't read it. But I've heard it was a good story. What's it about?

I enjoyed this chapter. These Foals are adorable in their wacky and childish ways, admittedly, the foal eating the eggs was a little dark, considering that animals are semi-intelligent in the show.

Still that aside I enjoyed this chapter, Blueblood's nightmare warms the canticles of my heart :raritystarry:.

Well, in a nutshell, it's about a demon named Crowley who is tasked with bringing about the end of the world by having a mother give birth to the anti-Christ. Crowley doesn't really want to do this, since he rather enjoys modern times and the various ways they provide to inflict misery upon humans, but that's higher management for you. Sometimes you just gotta do the sucky jobs. But what happens is when the anti-Christ is born, he accidentally gets switch with another, normal child. The normal child is raised by satanists to bring about the end of the world (which obviously goes nowhere), while the anti-Christ kid lives a normal life in a British suburb. There's a lot more to it than that, but I'll just cut to the chase. The parallels I'm drawing to your story here is that as the story progresses, the anti-Christ kid's evil powers start manifesting. But because he was raised as a more or less normal kid, he doesn't even realize he has them. Whenever he, in his childish naivete, disapproves of something in the world (war, pollution, etc.) he subconsciously removes the offending article from existence. Later on, when he starts to realize his powers, he desires to reshape the world into an ideal child's paradise. No bedtimes, eat whatever you want, no wars, perpetually happy families, etc, etc. He was supposed to be raised to want to destroy the planet, but instead all he wants is for things to remain simple and happy forever. It's like I said, satanic powers filtered through childish innocence. It's a good book, not mention really funny.
These babies have Discord's elderitch powers at their hooves, but have no understanding of the concepts of chaos, beyond a few pranks. They only use their powers to pursue their own split-second desires, much like the anti-Christ kid.
(That was a lot of text, wasn't it?)

258136 If it makes you feel any better, Meadow Lark doesn't understand what death is, so her eating the eggs wasn't out of a desire to be cruel, but rather a desire to get some food. Plus, Fluttershy didn't exactly teach her that bird EGGS are still considered friends rather than food. Meadow gets that she can't hurt or eat the animals that are moving around, but to her, eggs are just meals. She'll learn, though.

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