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The bastard that downvoted needs to loosen up. Just saying. This was hot~~~
Well the story delivers exactly what it promises - Filly Fooling.
2002053 I AM THE BASTARD WHO DOWNVOTED THIS STORY.
But in all seriousness, 3 of this site's most fucked foalcons are in my favorites. (A Learning Experience, Incest Of The Ages, and Are You Ready To Rumble.)
I just didn't like this story.
(No offense to Lunarx. You're a pretty good writer.)
Added to read later, gotta get to work!
All of the boner.
Very sexy. They'ed be thinking of colts rather then boys though. Otherwise it's perfect.
that was AMASING
am i the only one who noticed a typo of Daimond instead of Diamond
A bit of thesaurus use could help (especially with the repetition of the word "cum" in one paragraph), and the opening was a little jarring, as any story beginning with "Suddenly" tends to be---but all in all, pretty damn good! Characters were believable, as was the situation. A solid 3.4/5.
no bed
Not bad. This premise is pretty solid. It's something tried and true and it works for this story. The writing itself could use a look through. It would help if you had some clear breaks in the timeline of the story, or when locations change. You write DT and SS's characters well, though sometimes I'm a little unsure who is actually speaking. Still though, this is a nice little fic with some steamy action and serves its purpose as being a clop fic. Keep practicing your writing.
Commence read.
There were a few parts that were difficult to follow, though overall not bad.
2002053 i aggree
have a muffin
WTF!!!!!!
This story was AMAZING!!!
Very well done I will be reading this more ;)
Cheerily Cheerily Cheerily Cheerily
HOLY FUCKING CHRIST HOW THE HELL DID YOU TYPO THAT SO MANY TIMES!?
IT'S CHEERILEE.
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I CAME EVERYWHERE. THAT IS ALL.
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My bad. This was written many moons ago. In Overthrown I spelled it right, though, if that's any consolation.
2397621 That's okay. It was sexy enough.
2002053
Like a Vagina?
I love the use of the same paragraph. It brings a nice effect.
Okay I loved the story. this is my OTP after all.
I had trouble fully following which of the fillies were talking and acting.
otherwise a great story
that was awesome great super cool have a
The sheer amount of times Cheerilee is misspelled in this is too damn high.
OMG
I-I HAVE GONE CRAZY IRL X'D
one of the BEST BEST BEESSTTT stories ever.
This is just kind of how I was http://s1239.photobucket.com/user/Corywren36/media/gifs.gif.html because I went more than that xD my shipping level of them...IS OVER 9000000000!!!!!! X'DDD gosh I LOVE THIS STORY! XD I wish I could add it more than favorite! Sorry but I just have gone nutz xDDDD
This would probably be me but it's only the beginning xD http://sta.sh/09012a2jy6v
I never once imagined I'd give a story like this a chance but I decided to and damn, I love it.