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Twilight and Spike find an old book mentioning an even older artifact. She goes to investigate, not knowing what she'll find there...

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1 · 21st Jan 2013 · 314 words
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2 · 21st Jan 2013 · 518 words
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3 · 21st Jan 2013 · 503 words
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4 · 21st Jan 2013 · 496 words
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5 · 21st Jan 2013 · 658 words
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6 · 21st Jan 2013 · 555 words
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The Lesson · 21st Jan 2013 · 125 words
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Comment posted by catluvr2 deleted Jan 21st, 2013

Gweat and Powaful Twixie

Gweat and Powaful Twixie #2 · Jan 22nd, 2013 · · · The Lesson ·

Twixie stopped when you tried to emulate the manner in which Fluttershy speaks. Fluttershy may be timid, but the way it is written reads like one sentence would take 20 seconds to said by her in the story's time. The pegasus does not and has never taken 20 seconds to say one, simple thought. Also it took Twixie about 20 seconds to read it in real time.

Twixie knows Twilight Sparkle, and it seems unlike her(or any pony for that matter) to rush into a situation with little knowledge about it at a speed that almost seems comical. With no constricting value of time, Twixie wonders what the inane hurry is about.