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What is the worst thing your friend can say to you? Egghead? Leave me alone? I hope I never see you again? No. Those are only words, trifle without meaning, no weight, they are all forgiven and forgotten within a week. I know what it is. The worst thing a friend can say to you. I heard it from my number one assistant.
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Good... Good.
I remember reading same kind of story with Twilight being sick and Spike helping her.
While stories have same premise and overall structure, this one has a good punch. The line that Spike said.
Good build-up and very well done release.
Maybe it will sound odd, but I enjoyed it.
But it would be right to say I enjoyed how it was written.
Edit. Btw. Tragedy and Sad tags usually don't mix. It would be appropriate to leave sad tag.
Tragedy at least shows that characters struggle and have at least some hope. Oh wait... Wanderer D (one of moderators) has full explanation on all tags in his How-To blog.
Solid idea, but it just didnt hit me like some other things do. However I give it a
for the effort
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Aye, it is hardly a very original idea but as long as it is entertaining it is good. Glad you enjoyed it :)
R.I.P. Spike. Twilight's number one assistant.
This was good but the end just didn't quite have enough punch to really hit me in the feels, it was still sad but it just didn't seem to capture enough emotion. Perhaps we could've heard Spike's last word which could be something like "Goodbye Twilight." or "I think it's time."
Nooooooo Spike!!!!
Beautiful story, but why did I find this under the Clop section?
One word: FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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God damn this is sad. When I saw the label it peaked my interest. I regret it. But it was a moving story nevertheless.
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When you're in a colossal fandom such as this, it's quite hard to make anything original. Often when you try to do something, chances are it's already been done before.
Also, loved it. That last part really hit me in the feels, and showed just how strong the bond is between Twilight and Spike. It expresses how much of a caring parent she truly is.
This fanfiction was good and you should feel good.
Sounds like a certain story of mine.....
Nah, but this a really good story!
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I swear I did not put it there
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Glad you liked! If I ever write more fanfic I will pick a happier theme, it feels a bit strange writing about such a dark subject in an otherwise very happy and innocent world.
Not bad.
Few mistakes here and there, but not bad. The only thing I'm disappointing in is the lack of stuff happening before Spike's dome got cracked.
I think there should be more, But it's good all the same.
2003538 A goodbye from Spike would have meant Spike was accepting his end, which is not what the author wanted. The tragedy in his story comes from the fact that Spike is still afraid of death even in his last few seconds and is asking Twilight to do something she can't.
2008655 Well the letter doesn't say what the worst thing is, I really think they should reaffirm what it is.
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And here I thought I was too obvious with it
“I love you Twilight. I love you so much. Please don’t leave me.”
“I love you so much Twilight.” He said again. “Please do not let me die.”
2009133 Well I don't really know if that's the worst thing a friend could say. Regardless I want to say that ending had me tearing up inside but I don't know, something just seemed to be lacking.
All in all, pretty good story. The plot was sincere, as were the feels. I would suggest getting an editor or editing it yourself, because there are few mistakes.
Might wanna change "you yourself in grief all those lost years" to "you yourself will grieve for the lost years"
Anyway, very good story. Sad, sweet, and to the point.
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You are welcome to if you are up for the task
I have never been good with editing, I am character blind to my own text and the language barrier is not helping much either.
poor spike
You bathe in our tears, don't you?
This is the letter to Celestia(Apparently also known as "Celesta"). Why Twilight uses her name and not "you"?.
Fine story otherwise.
Reading this while listening to "Ronan"... not the best idea. Tears achieved.
Short, but filled with sad.
Only one quick question: This is a letter addressed to a princess named "Celesta". Is that another princess, or a misspelling of "Celestia"? The reason I ask is because Princess Celestia is mentioned in the letter... so, "Celesta" is either another princess (in which case, I'd suggest using a different name, like Luna), of it's a misspelling of "Celestia". If that's the case, then you should change the "Celestia" in the body of the letter to "you".
Other than that, a little tearjerker that is just enough to make me sigh heavily and wonder how long it will take me to get to sleep. Always good to find a new Spike/Twi relationship exploration fic, even if it's sad.
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It is a misspelling.
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This story is the product of me needing a outlet for my feelings. I wrote it simply to do something when my dog died. Looking back at it I am not very pleased with it and I can not see myself writing a story this sad again.
Also, could anyone please tell me why sudden influx of interest in this story? I had almost forgotten about it until it started getting comments.
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I read it cuz it got added to a group.
The worst thing a friend can say is... goodbye.
Coincidentally, I happen to be listening to an appropriate song for this fic...
that hit me right in the feels... great job.
this struck my heart like a sharp knife
I cried my eyes out
soooooooooo sad but I love it!!! 
Quite possibly the only story I've read that genuinely made my eyes moisten. Not crying, but as close as possible.
It was that line right there that did it.
Wow......this is sad
That's, sad...
The feels . Oh god spike no . So heart felt
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Other than that tiny mistake, good job.
This story had all the feels
Have a thumbs up
So how quite was spike????
SPELLING ERRROOOOORRRRRRRR
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It is, because Twilight would be left knowing he was afraid, but could not help him.
Isn’t this supposed to be a letter to Celestia? Then why does it say “Celestia” instead of “you?”