Jerry, a seasoned and disgruntled Microwave Repair Pony (or MRP) is called out to Ponyville to help a young mare whose microwave is, well, broken. Little does he know, he will be stepping into the lair of the craziest pony in Equestria. Rated teen for references to mild drug use.
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It says comedy, if it makes me laugh, you'll earn a fav from me, I am... er... I dont know how to explain it right now, well lets just say I am bad as a douchebag when I am bored, and today was really boring...
Hope I'll. Reading it now, seems a bit interesting.
You made stuff too random, unorganized as far as I can say. Fix this, put some more sense to it, and a little bit oomph, and with some luck, you'll have a good story, it sucks at this time.
At least for me. Have a thumbs up anyway,
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1997258 Sorry you didn't like it. I didn't really put much effort into this, I just got bored last night and decided to write a story without any thought
Anyway, thanks for the review. Next time I write a story with little to no plot, I'll take your comments into account
...You're an idiot. You're a terrible, terrible idiot and I'm ashamed to say that I know you. Although I can say one thing with absolute certainty: Fuck the fourth wall.
Eh. There are some genuinely funny moments in here, but at times it felt like it was trying too hard.
What. The fuck. I have absolutely no response other than to explode and implode at the same time in a Planck measurement of time.